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Comment by Wannabe Ginger on 02/21/19
Just called in - after five more years - just to say this I still my favourite story on the entire site! If you're still around and writing, Marti B, you're a star!! xx Comment by high quality backlinks on 07/18/14 xoy8dr I really enjoy the article.Thanks Again. Will read on... Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 11/03/09 Hi Marti! Comment by WannabeGinger on 05/24/08 Marti, if you're still out there... please write some more!!!!!Written this day........ what a great service on Storysite... I know that the story Sharon and Geri will come around again! I have never read another story that has the pace and the empathy for pure reality. Wonderful... still! LOL WbG. xx Comment by WannabeGinger on 07/27/07 Still waiting for the update, Marti! I'm gonna get my wife to take me to see Sharon at her salon!!! (She's writing a piece for Crystal's Storysite now!) Comment by WannabeGinger on 04/27/06 Sorry the story hasn't been completed... it was the inspiration for my own set of chapters.... An Apprentice Needs Help... also on Crystal's site....... a real inspiration.... I could imagine myself in Geri's chair at the salon..... imagine his tensions when deciding to go each stage onwards... loved every minute... enough to write a story of my own... PLEASE, Marti B.... complete the story of Geri's life.... better still, go back and extend the story you have written! Comment by wannabe ginger on 06/14/05 I keep coming back to your wonderful story - it captures my own fantasies SOOOOOOOO well!! Do please write a follow-up - get geri back into the salon for a new make-over... give us the details of the selection from alternate styles.... play around with more colouring experiences........ WOnderful!!!! Comment by Erica on 05/28/01 Great story. Can I get a referal for Sharon's salon? Comment by Karen Elizabeth L on 05/25/01 Fantastic story! Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 05/25/01 What a lovely story! No lurid lust, just the love/friendship of two girlfriends. let's have more. Comment by Elaine on 05/24/01 I could almost smell that salon! Well done. The story is well told and is a good length. It doesnt dive too deep but it flows really well. Comment by emmie dee on 05/24/01 Beautiful! I loved this beauty-parlor story partly for the well-told details of the physical transformation, and also for the nurturing, loving relationship that Sharon had for Geri. The kind of story that gives "sweet and sentimental" a good name. |
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