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Two Mistakes
by Dennis St.John

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Comment by Anu on 10/30/17
Please post the next chapters asap..

Comment by Anu on 10/30/17
As u see all who read has highly appreciated the writing and I m no different.. it's my first SM story and the kind of twidtbit has wants me to be right in front and play the character of Michelle... Perfect Issy swinging both ways ... Love it and wanting more chapters to see what happened to Nora, Janice, Michelle friends ...

Comment by Helena on 04/11/10
Is there a part 6 to the story?

Comment by Bone- Me-deep- Bob on 10/04/09
This is by far the hottest story that I ever read.I never had a homo experience in my life.I have always been straight hetro guy.After reading this story I now want a threesom. A big bed and a guy laying on his back with a eleven inch cock down my throat while I deep throat him on my knees and my ass high and legs wide while another guy rams a eleven inch cock up my ass at the same timer and shoots a quart of cum up my ass until my ass cant take another drop of cum and gallons pour out when done, the same time I swallow a quart of cum in my belly,over and over until I swallow a so much cum until it fills my swelling belly to the point I wont need to eat for three or four days, then do it over again in four days and then all over again until I never have to eat. love the proteen. I have been putting butt plugs in my ass bigger and bigger until I now have a 4 1/2" plug in  and and still spreading. I also have been practing deep throat with a double dildo (16") and can swallow about 12" so I am ready. now need two hot volenteers.Your hot storys ROCK! please make 1 or 2 more chapters, I love it........
    Call Me Deep Throat Wannabe

Comment by Dolly on 07/26/09
All of your stories are excellent but Two Mistakes had my sissy clit dripping wet.  If Eppert and Roper did a review they would have to give it two sissy clits up.  Oh, and welcome back!  

Comment by Jim on 03/14/09
Once again...you have me dripping.  Only you have the ability to combine incest, cross dressing and overwhelming sexuality and make it poetry.  Kisses to you....and firm spanks as well.

Comment by Jim on 12/12/08
Your stories are simply masterpieces.  I cannot get enough of them. As I told you in my last e-mail, I am a powerlifting, martial artist...a real "guy"...but your stories have me wanting to be taken and fucked.  You have me WANTING to be forced to my knees and made to suck a beautiful cock.  You are magnficent...and I send you my affection and my desire.

Comment by john on 10/12/08
it was beautifully written and i can't wait to read many more chapters from you

Comment by Georgea on 05/31/08
Thrilling; a little monsterous, tho'

Comment by Randie on 02/04/08
Encore!!!!!!  Please Write more.... This was one of the best yet.

Randie


Comment by Jo-Anne on 01/01/08
Oh. My. God!

Wow, what a story this is. Histoire d'O with a -large- twist. I can't say all of this story appealed to me, but it was captivating. It is so unreal yet so believable, it's strange. Mesmerizing comes to mind at the end of part 4, and now I just can't wait for more.
I expect to be horrified at times, but unable to turn away.

An enormous treat. Thank you.

Jo-Anne


Comment by jeannette on 12/27/07
This story - Two Mistakes- is VERY erotic! This would become a perfect "scenario" for me... IF it did not have all the Physical Pain (S&M). I got thru the first 3 Chapters, and - needless to say- I had wet my panties more than once!... Great storyline, especially when you incorporate your Mother into the story! That - in itself - was rather uniqe! Very well done!

Comment by Andrea.Hesel on 12/06/07
This is a highly erotically charged story - my panties are so wet, I have been frigging myself raw!

I can't wait to read more from you - pretty please keep it up and send us one more!

I love you!
Andrea


Comment by Sara/Simon on 12/03/07
Wonderful story, it twists and turns so much leaving the reader begging for more, please continue, PLEEEEASE continue!!

Comment by anne-marie on 11/27/07
I loved this story. The allusions to the Story of O, my favourite, is wonderful...and the initial entrapment in the cinema was absolutley stunning.

I look forward to part 5 of this story and, hopefully, future stories from you.

Thank you so much
anne-marie
xxxxx


Comment by Pam on 11/26/07
DSJ-

my goodness, the turn(s) this story has taken......surprising, but, BRAVO!!

you ARE the master!!

xo Pam


Comment by Janine on 10/17/07
I really loved the 1st two chapters.  I was on the edge of my chair the whole time I was reading it, getting more "excited" the more I read.  I can hardly wait for the following chapters.  Thank you for sharing.

Comment by pam on 10/08/07
FANTASTIC!!

More please, many more chapters.....well written and thought out.

Pam xo


Comment by katlo on 09/27/07
Great story. Thanks

Comment by sissycamila on 09/27/07
Both chapters had me hot and bothered all the way through. Just couldn´t stop reading. Hope there´ll be soon another chapter.

greetings, camila


Comment by Kristina on 09/26/07
This is great...I love it. Please continue!!!

Comment by slimv on 09/26/07
This is a classic case of Different Strokes for Different Folks.  If your thing is Force and humiliation, you're going to love this one.  Even if its not, you're going to appreciate the writing behind this well written story.

I would have preferred more romance, but I'm not knocking it.  There's always a chance for that to come around and if there's another part, I'll definitely check it out.
-sv




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