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Two-Point-Five Women
by P.S. d'File

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Comment by crorkz on 08/03/14
5aX362 I cannot thank you enough for the post.Thanks Again. Fantastic.

Comment by wannabe on 04/08/12
I wish it happened to me.

Comment by buy cheap oem software on 02/12/12
m4aUpR Author, Shoot yourself a knee..!

Comment by Silvia on 01/14/12
RIDICULOUS!
One of the worst stories I ever read!

Comment by lurkergirl on 03/03/10
BEST story on this site!  Awesome!

Comment by ratty9 on 02/01/09
What a really great story, i loved every bit, it's a shame petal did not pair off with tina and both staying as girls. The pictures are amazing and did not leave you to imagine what their looks were. Thank you very much for a truly fine tale.

Comment by Mischele on 06/17/08
It's was wonderful, story is every "girls" dream.  You have amazing fantasy. Keep going. I think, and other readers probably will agree with me You need to write more, story 2, or something similar. Pls don't stop with writing!!!!

Comment by Tori Konchel on 03/21/08
I felt like I lived the dream that I have had for 55yrs.  Thank You for a well thought out fantasy. I have been brought back in touch
with my female side and have accepted myself for who I am and not what I am. Would love to hear from you if all possible.
Thanks again
xoxox
Tori

Comment by juliej on 01/13/08
the story was great the pictures help as i went through the scenes this was great i feel that more stories like this but in a different context would be great brilliant story many more please but also i like most of the forced stories thankyou again

Comment by Paul on 12/18/07
Unlike most of the other comments, I'm not sure that the pictures helped! I actually think that this material could have made a realy good novel.   With less tittalation and more introspection we could have had a lot more insight into the mindframe of TV and transgendered people.  you are on the brink of crossing the divide from torrid web based stories to solid litrature. (God that sound pompus but I realy want to encourage you...publish!) A wonderfull fantasy and a very enjoyable read.   Well done, thank you

Comment by Andy on 11/29/07
I'd like to echo most of the comments before me - a truly amazing story. If only everyone could have the chance to explore genders like that! I await further stories with bated breath, and wonder if you will ever manage to top that one.

And where did those pictures come from??

Congratulations on a top-class effort!


Comment by Adelle on 11/18/07
This is the sexiest story I've ever read.  What an amazing fantasy!  You fulfilled every dream I've ever had and gave me some new ones I didn't even know about.  I never got through more than one chapter without needing some relief.  Thank you.

Comment by Cleo on 10/26/07
Thoroughly enjoyed all ten sections. Couldn't wait to get the time to read on. The addition of the pictures totally enhanced a great story that could have stood alone with no pictures. Great job!!!
Since the pictures of Kat showed a girl with large breasts, I wonder why she would have wanted even larger ones. I'll go along with the premise because you created a great story.
Can't wait for more, don't stop!! With your great talent, we're all waiting for the next edition.

Comment by Sally on 10/14/07
This is probably my number 3 story of all that I have read here so far.  I enjoyed the pace and really felt in tune with the main character.  As an active T-girl I've always fatasised about what it would be like to have real full breasts of my own.  The bondage element was just that much more to enjoy.  I felt let down by the ending just because I felt our heroine would have done better as a T-girl or a woman.  Anyways, just my preference.  I'm the type that rewrites the ending to movies to suit myself.  I would love to see you do another story here.  The finely crafted stories like this are hard to find.

Thank You!


Comment by sissy joan on 10/08/07
Please post more!

Comment by Kristina on 10/04/07
This was an A-M-A-Z-I-N-G story. One of the best. I loved it and read a part each day...I'm sad it's finished. Please please keep writing stories. God knows how long it must've taken to write that and do all the images. But it was worth it. We appreciate the time and effort. Great stuff.

Comment by Carol Fisk on 10/03/07
Wonderful story I really enjoyed it. Makes it all feel worth all the work I do to makes myself soft and fem and being fucked is the best part. Love Carol

Comment by Jayne Louise MacGregor on 09/30/07
Many thanks for such a wonderful story.  Once I started I couldn't stop and was so glad when the remainder appeared all in one go.  This must be in the top 1% of the best of the really good stories on here (and there's plenty of quality hidden within the huge selection!)  The fantastic images added to the whole effect of the story wonderfully.

Look forward to reading a lot more of your work in the future (I hope!)  ;-)

Love and hugs, Jayne


Comment by angela on 09/28/07
Many thanks for sharing such a long and interesting story with us - and it was nice not to have to worry for once about bad grammar and spelling !  I found the story fairly plausible, and even enjoyed the happy ending.  A pleasant change from much of what one reads here.

Comment by U12much on 09/28/07
These storys were very dissapointing.  This illustrations and story line drag on and on.  No action

Comment by greta on 09/25/07
This is quite an extraordinary and at times very hot story told in 10 parts with unbelievably outstanding images. The best I have ever seen in a story! Great!!!
It came in my eyes to a really unexpected ending. I was caught a little by surprise after all what our hero(ine) had been going through. Well, it is a fantasy but the last sentences looked like the author went exactly through this experience. Now I doubt that one can get rid of such big tits and appear soon after as a "normal" man again plus loosing all the mannerism aquired through months and months of intense training. I think the sentences at the end were simply superfluous and don´t do this story justice.

greetings, greta


Comment by juliej on 09/24/07
part 2 getting better &more enjoyable

Comment by Sarah H. on 09/21/07
This story is off to a very good start.I'm sure our hero(ine)will be having some really great adventures. OH YEAH.

Comment by juliej on 09/20/07
brilliant so far i feel that he is going to get far mor thanhe expected please more soon brilliant

Comment by girlyman1313 on 09/19/07
Very enjoyable story definately enhanced by the images.  Having worn both a latex catsuit and a latex hobble dress, I can definately see how being the guy in this story would be a lot of fun.  I am looking forwared to the rest of the story with great anticipation!

Comment by julie on 09/19/07
excellent

Comment by jeannie on 09/18/07
cool flow of story and pics add to the anticipation...can't wait!

Comment by Kristina on 09/18/07
Wow, great story, great pictures. What a lucky guy!  Keep it going!!!

Comment by Kelli on 09/18/07
I really enjoyed the story and the images were fantastic.  Keep up the good work.  I can't wait for part 2.

Comment by Rachel CD on 09/16/07
Don't stop,can't wait for #2.The photos are hot! Like Petal I won't be sleeping well tonight!

Comment by Omega Girl on 09/15/07
Not ordinarily my thing, but this is good!  Can't wait to see more!

Comment by Dick Dunham on 09/15/07
Great story.  The photos really made it even more enjoyable. Looking forward to more.

Comment by B on 09/15/07
Great start for what could be a very interesting story line, can't wait for #2.
I was just put in a cb2000 by my Wife, and She said that it might be a long time before I see any freedom. She put the large points on and told me to enjoy and snapped the lock. Last night was really a night mare every time I got hard the points really dug in, she just giggled and said, I had to learn to enjoy it. I'm not looking forward to tonight.
 Why don't you try something like my prediciment.



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