it was a great story manythanks

I loved the story keep up the great writing

I have the same comments as "Cassandra" and "Nora- Adrianne Deret"... Beautiful story! EXCEPT... I was .... not ... in Jennifer's PLACE!!!... Like Jennifer, I would be in "HEAVEN"!!!

a good story

i agree with my previous comments a good story a punnishment to suit the crime welldone

what other comments can i make a great story but wished it was me what a way to go

Nice    nice story   good clean fun no cussing no smutt ...Jenifur needs to go on and  grow in that life now started ...she has to blossum and become the cheerleader and then prom queen .....being an a+ student with still more adventures ahead...thank you  thank you
for a wonderful story .....Rone  

I like these type of stories partially because something like it happeded to me between 11 and 13 YOA but the experience was not so positive. I like to think that it could have been the best experience of my young life if "some people" had behaved as those in this story did.  

This novel is a true work of art and is a powerful and erotic story that truely derserve a lot of credit totally femine for any tv xdresser to relax with and to dress for bravo bravo well-doen

an intresting story of an unusual punnishment it seemed to do the trick but would have given anything to be in his shoes

I agree with Angel that the situation is nothing new, & that a few
familiar elements showed up in the story. But the general tone of
the story, the atmosphere, was delightful. In a tale of this sort,
it's how it's told that counts, & I thought this was told very
well. On the other hand, I don't think the story need be made any
longer. There was a nice feeling of closure at the end, & the hint
that this might not be the last of Jennifer was just enough.
.
--Pervy

Nice effort and coming from a long time reader of this and a few other sites I must add a few comments.

This is a common story line and I could not help but notice parts of several different stories I have read included within these paragraphs. The little reference of the gay boy going to the dance with the boy in a dress. One problem is with the final hair setting. The boy had just received a perm one week earlier, how did they get the curls out? A perm does not vanish with a wash, condition and set.

I did like the part about not getting his ears pierced. That was real cool! Different than most story's! The way the girls bought him things for his outfit was a very nice twist as well.

All in all I liked the story so alike several others with different parts thrown in from a few story's I know well. Just different enough in parts to set it apart. I hope to see some more from you this time totaly original using those slight differences that made this story just unique enough.

Huggles
Angel

Dear Betsy,

This is a lovely story, dear. It truly is a shame that it is a stand alone. I loved reading it and was sad when it ended. Jennifer's character is so well developed at this point you really should do another part or two. I particularly loved your clear presentation and uncluttered story line. Thanks bunches for this story.  Hugs!!

Dear Betsy,
I truly enjoyed the story line very much. Even though you wrote it as a stand alone story, I believe it has enough of a base to now continue Jenifer's life for a while longer.  How her mom handles the changes, Jen's new vision of herself and the perception of the other studants towards her.  why not give it a shot?