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Ulterior Motives
by Jennifer White

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Comment by juliej on 02/21/08
brilliant story well set up what a way to go&and he didnot suspect anything

Comment by SassySue on 12/25/07
Another great story from Jennifer White!   Vickie has already said much of what I would have too, so I'll just thank Jennifer for posting another sexy, erotic, well-written story.  My only complaint is that there are always a few words that are misspelled, which detracts from the overall enjoyment of the story.  Nevertheless, this was a top-notch story of a poor love-smitten (or at least boob-and-sex-smitten) man tricked by a coniving woman into becoming a woman.

Keep up the good work!
SS


Comment by Alanna Jeanne on 12/03/07
I know you do great work place fiction and I love your secretary storys where the boss ends up girlified doing office work.  This could work with other situations. Imagine forcing some domineering doctor to dress and work as a nurse or nurse's aide or a restaurant owner into giving up his place to the host and becoming waitress or hostess or even a carhop. Even better, a misbehaving airline pilot who is wiped off the company records and forced to become a female flight attendant.

Comment by Vickie on 11/28/07
Jennifer, I have no idea how you manage to write so many of the kinds of stories I love reading and -- more slowly -- writing, tale after tale of delightfully devious women converting credulous men to their own purposes.  At one time I thought you must be posting from a vast backlog.  Yet they keep coming!  Please accept my thanks, admiration, and I must confess it, envy.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/25/07
What about Christy's parents?  If they would have disowned her for having a male roommate, surely they would have done that and worse if they knew she and erin were a lesbian couple ... or would they tolerate Erin because of the grandchild?  I would like to know the story Christy and Erin told them.  Something pretty close to the truth only with him being a willing TS and Christy loving him/her enough to accept and help and stay would possibly work.



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