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Ultimate Make over
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Paul G F on 10/30/06
A very subtle story with a nice sadistic twist at the end

Comment by Minga Minga on 06/05/04
Please correct your grammar.  You keep pumping out stories without the most rudimentary speel or grammar checks.

Comment by Xyzzy on 06/02/04
I liked the basic story, but, (Yes I appreciate the irony of this as I'm guilty of the same thing), you need to set the story aside a few days and re-proof read. Too many language errors are distracting.

If my old English teachers could hear me now their jaws would drop. Now if I could just learn to use punctuation more complex than a period.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 06/02/04
I liked it anyhow.

Comment by Maria Elena on 06/02/04
Very bad. VERY bad.  But then if if were good, it wouldn't be Jutras, would it?



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