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The Ultimate Sissy Doll
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Comment by Mike on 11/03/18
You definitely put a severe twist in this one. Excellent imagination. The perpetual happy song just crept me out, considering the use of it. Comment by The Reviewer on 05/15/14 I read this story and thought it was great even though it was a little sick almost a horror story. But all in all it was great Comment by Silvia. on 10/26/10 Very bad story! Comment by eric grant on 10/22/10 a great big kiss and a hug from me to you i just loved it Comment by sally on 07/13/10 Personally I find this quite revolting, and feel it has no place here on this site. The writer has an exceptionally sick mind to come up with this, and should not be featured here. Comment by Wow on 04/11/09 "Saw" meets "Misery" meets...shit, I don't know what else this thing met. Very detailed writing, that's for sure. Just not my cup of tea. Comment by Judy on 12/10/08 Genius! William Burroughs eat your heart out! I've only just discovered your existence and your work, Barbi, but you're already an inspiration; I look forward to delving further. You're my heroine! (Oh, plus, I want to look just like you...) Comment by subgamble on 10/11/08 I really liked the story. A real turn on. I would have probably left the legs because I like the sight of a well turned feminine gam. Especially in bondage. Otherwise I loved it Comment by Rashauni on 01/06/08 I'm utterly speechless (and not 'cos I'm gagged!) I honestly believed that nobody but myself had such bizarre fantasies. Well done! The "boxed doll" ending was particularly... uh,... (what's a word meaning both 'revoltingly horrific' and 'thrillingly romantic'?). I hope you know what I mean. Comment by Priscilla on 03/18/06 wow well you warned thought I wanted to be a sissy but not sure now! Comment by juliej on 03/16/06 this was an exception what a way to go a very hard hitting story but to much violence for my taste Comment by Madeline Lazzaro on 03/15/06 WOW!!! You outdid yourself! Yea, it's very violent and not something arousing to most, but since you tried it, I think you succeeded! Great writing! Comment by Digitalice on 03/08/06 Very sick. Comment by A friend on 03/07/06 Well, you were right - you warned the reader. |
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