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Uncle Betty
by Paula Mortenson

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Comment by dee on 09/22/07
another very relaxing and exjoyable story. thank you

Comment by Kristina Ward on 10/23/05
Thanks for such a great story. Your writing is wonderful.

Comment by Early June on 10/16/05
This story has a nice feeling. everyone looks good except for Betty's former wife.  I half expected her to show up at the restaurant one day.  I am glad she didm't.  Well told.  Gosh, it would be nice if transitions were that easy in real life.  But you did good, and they all lived happily ever after.  Thanks again  for sharing the fruits of your talents with us.

Comment by Polly P. on 10/15/05
Thank you so much for such a beautiful story.The love and tenderness between the characters actually had me crying at the end. Isn't it a shame that the love and acceptance of people who are somewhat different is not a common trait. As shown in your story, everyone can come out a happy winner. Once again, thank you so much.
Polly P.



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