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Under Cover
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Jessica. on 02/13/09
Yeah! Dumb, dumb, dumb, dumb dumb, FBI!
How do they trust in Ellen?
Bye.

Comment by Allie on 07/05/03
A good story

But I have to agree with Jezzi why on earth would the FBI trust a forth woman with thier undercover agent after losing three to them already? Are men in the FBI THAT dumb? I dont think so.

Allie

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/05/03
The thing that broke my suspension of disbelief was the fact of Ellen as "Wendy's" contact.  It had already been stated that the previous three female agents had "gone over".  Why on Earth would they trust Ellen?  Why on Earth would they put their female impersonating agent in the hands of yet a 4th female agent, one who was close enough to the organization that there was a good possibility that she had been converted herself.?

Comment by Paula on 07/04/03
different type of story but interestingly enjoyable



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