Crystal's Story Site
·
Return to Story Index Page
·
Add your Comments
·
Story Comments by Readers
Undercover Assignment
| Latest comments are shown at top of page. |
Comment by jake jilennanal on 05/15/17
doIPfJ You, my friend, ROCK! I found just the information I already searched all over the place and just could not locate it. What a perfect website. Comment by mattew crorkz on 10/21/14 vofkQL Very well written post. It will be supportive to anyone who employess it, as well as me. Keep doing what you are doing - looking forward to more posts. Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14 qFeoXU Great, thanks for sharing this article post. Awesome. Comment by crorkz matz on 08/03/14 UC1YkY Really appreciate you sharing this article.Thanks Again. Comment by mattew crorkz on 08/01/14 owxgqC Thanks for the article.Really looking forward to read more. Keep writing. Comment by the best seo service on 09/07/13 1GFpbN Major thanks for the post.Thanks Again. Really Great. Comment by kimmie on 02/22/12 Your critics are tough, but I would have liked a little more.OK, just one more story tonight. Comment by cheap oem software on 02/11/12 c2jhY3 Comrade kill yourself.. Comment by Silvia. on 09/16/11 This story is a shame. Comment by pink nighty on 05/05/03 Good attempt but it did not seem at all finesed, work on the next part Comment by Francesca Barrie on 07/25/01 Pretty good for a first attempt I'd say. It is a short story, and for me did not suffer too much for lack of character descriptions. The salient points were covered and it worked for me. There is plenty of scope for continuation .....go for it, let's have a sequel. Comment by Nellie D on 07/17/01 Needs a little polish but not bad for a first effort. A slight variation on the forced to dress theme. Part of the polishing up should include a little more character developement. |
| Add your Comments |
The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated. Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated. I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory. Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also. There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box. Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs. It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional. Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite. |
Please report any problems to Crystal