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Under Covers
by Marti B

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Comment by Silvia. on 11/04/09
I liked, even without justice to the boys. They're innocents!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Early June on 02/09/05
Another well done tale.  I liked the theme and the way you carried it out.  The characters were full enough for the role the played.  Was Amber, and later, Rachel promiscuous?  I am not certain i followed that thread correctly.  Thanks again for sharing a well done tale.

Comment by Petra Pan on 06/16/01
Very good story.  Really enjoyed it.  This was the first time I'd read of one of the Salem victims coming back to bring revenge on an entire town.

Comment by Mr Man on 05/29/01
This was an enjoyable story with good characters and nice pacing. Thanks for sharing it.

Comment by Nellie D on 05/26/01
A magic story with a difference, the magic is in the form of a curse. The town was ancient and had endured the witch hunts of New England of the late 1600's. The curse was invoked by a woman accused of being a witch. The story conveys the details with good discription and good characters.



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