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Undercover Secretary
by Alana

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Comment by Amanda on 01/28/13
Great outfits and shoes.

Comment by Silvia on 05/25/10
Bad story.

Comment by Gwen on 06/22/06
Alana,
This was really a fine story.  I was seeing as I was reading!  The pictures helped, but your description was excellent.  thanks for all your efforts.

Comment by Sky Above on 12/20/05
Alana, your story is well written and exciting to read. It was a blast reading about all the lovely outfits you were forced to wear, and what it felt like to wear them and be desired by the sex-hound boss!! Your pictures perfectly depicted the different outfits you wore, and each one looked scrumptious on you!! Keep up the excellent work!!
Thanks,
Luv,
Sky

Comment by Stephanie on 03/18/05
Great story! I just loved the pics! The silk dress with the scarf was my absolute favorite! And the wig with it was gorgeous. I also loved the poses you did on the couch, very sexy and ladylike.Keep up the stories, looking forward to more.

Comment by Gina La VaLampe on 08/23/04
Alana, You're so convincing, I haven't even read the story, just marveling at your pics, darling!
Gina

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/18/04
Great story  great outfits. What maore can I say!!!

Comment by Pippa K. on 08/18/04
This story would be enjoyable even without the photos, but who can deny the fun they add!  Keep up the good work!

Comment by Paula on 08/18/04
love the outfits in the photos and great stories. Terrfic ending.

Comment by ALAN on 08/17/04
GREAT STORY & PHOTOS



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