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Underneath It All
by M0rr1gan

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
ko4jTh Outstanding post however I was wondering if you could write a litte more on this subject? I ad be very grateful if you could elaborate a little bit more. Appreciate it!

Comment by mia pron khalifa on 10/25/19
qkdBAT Very interesting info !Perfect just what I was  searching  for! If you want to test your memory, try to recall what you were worrying about one year ago today. by Rotarian.

Comment by chocopie on 12/20/18
9Miiew superb post.Never  knew this, appreciate it for letting me know.

Comment by smashing top seo on 10/25/13
D8UAp0 wow, awesome post.Much thanks again.

Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 08/07/04
This is a wonderful story, skillfully blending elements of sorcery and sci-fi into an enjoyable tale.  It is definitely a cut above standard TG fiction.  I must confess a certain feeling of flattery that my MIBD concept has been adopted by another author, who has put her own unique stamp upon it and took it in a direction I had really never considered.  WOW!  The result is a dark, brooding, thrilling and rather horrifying tale that quite frankly scared my panties off.  Well done, M0rr1gan.  I look forward to more of your writing.

Comment by Pippa K. on 08/04/04
An auspicious and ambitious story, which works rather nicely.  Reminds me of my favorite cancelled TV show ("Special Unit 2"), except with better characters and dialog.  Very nice, indeed.  My only area of concern is that you've left your best characters a bit too fried at the end.  I would have liked to see them back again, but it looks like only magic could make that happen.



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