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Unexpected Changes
by Yuri

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Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 09/20/09
I'm sorry, but it isn't a good.
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Comment by Rena on 04/19/05
This is a nice story but all your parts do seem to be a little short if you could try to extend them that might help you out some!

Comment by Rena on 02/12/04
I've read both of these and though DBz tends to get old this is a lovely story you have going on.  I suprise you haven't posted the third part yet.  I happily await it's arrival even if you don't get more comments from readers.



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