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Unfaithful
by Dave Hicks

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Comment by Tangela on 12/13/11
A pleasingly riaontal answer. Good to hear from you.

Comment by Mike on 05/08/03
Dave that story was really great.  As Terri stated, it shows a lot of originality that is really refreshing.  I hope that you will continue with you ideas.   You are one heck of a writer.

Comment by Amber Chalise on 05/07/03
The story read like a joke with a tg twist to it which made me happy that a story had a fresh look to it for once. Terri comments were right about details and going in to them.

Comment by Terri on 05/06/03
     I really liked this story. I lost count of the plot twists- and that was great. The only suggestion I would make is that I would have liked to have seen a lot more description of the physical changes involved. Or, possibly, if you explore this theme again, a story in which the wife changes both herself and her husband- or- maybe- changes just herself. There was a lot of originality to the story, something which is unfortunately rare on Story Site, and it was well appreciated.



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