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The Uniform
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Comment by mia pron khalifa on 12/20/18
BpWOCi in the daylight, as i enjoy to find out more and more. Comment by trishahot on 04/23/13 My body temperature raised steadily, as the story continued. What a lucky gurl! Comment by Tony on 02/22/13 WOW, if only this could happen to me Comment by julieh on 01/04/13 good story intresting and busy Comment by pansey on 06/14/12 A nice story with lots of love. I really enjoyed reading it although it was hard without paragraphs. Comment by Lost Soul on 05/12/11 Yikes my eyes are sore this story needs paragraphs can someone fix this and then let me know thats . . Comment by Roland on 11/17/10 Great story, absolutely one of my favorites on this site. I especially enjoyed the suspense in it and the combination of domination with tender emotions. Sweet and sexy, nice going. Comment by Steve on 11/02/10 Nicely written story,especially as its your first. I much prefer this style of story to those of a more violent or belittling nature. Any chance of furthering this story and further ones of a similar nature? Well done regardless. Comment by Kandis on 10/02/10 Very well done. I must say that I hope you will make future installments of this story. It has started off quite well. Excellent job for a first time. :) Comment by bunnyfurr24 on 09/30/10 For a first effort, a very entertaining and well thought out story. Hope you have more in the future! Comment by Alan on 03/26/10 Thanks to all for your kind comments. Comment by Geraldo on 08/04/09 Alan, Comment by Riki on 03/12/09 Some guys have all the luck! Comment by Ashley on 02/06/09 I loved your stoty please write more. Comment by Rowan on 06/06/08 Good story Alan,.. I love the crossdresser being accepted stories,.. well written,.. please make more:-},.. Comment by Sue Davis on 05/25/08 An excellent story It is a change to see a story where girls accept a male in such a fashion. Usually they only try to humilate them but here they are willing to accept his choice and to make the best of it. Looking forward to more. Comment by Dawn on 05/24/08 I really enjoyed your story and would love to read part two. As you have left lots of room to elaborate and to build on Comment by tony on 10/02/07 brilliant, never read about someone taking it to that exteme...about not meeting the humiliation.....that so many are afraid of. Comment by Josie on 08/20/07 This is one of the best "first" TG stories I have read. I liked the way the women dress David and especially the slow seduction. Comment by juliej on 03/11/07 a very good story with 2 understanding women what a way to go you can imagine how it going go on from this brilliant more please Comment by Branda on 01/14/07 Well what a terrific story and when can we have the sequel. Send him out shopping dressed with the ladies and let him get the confidence to go out side. Lots to add to the sequel, going dancing, going to the doctors and even going to night school. Comment by sue on 01/07/07 loved the story,let's have some more Comment by Dorothy on 01/04/07 IT was a great story and i hated to se it end so quickly, i am dieing to find out what happened at breakfast please write the ending. Comment by Gwen on 06/22/06 Super, lots of room to elaborate and build on. Keep it up. Comment by Southerner on 01/03/06 A very beautiful story with a hint of truthfulness,write more. Comment by julie on 01/24/04 an interesting story excellent for a first you could expand this more by increasing the line ie hormones and other female items plus more bondage and in the end becoming a ladys maid or slave Comment by julie on 01/24/04 an interesting story excellent for a first you could epand this more by increasing the line ie hormones and other female items plus more bondage and in the end becoming a ladys maid or slave Comment by Vivian on 07/22/03 Great story Alan. I love this type story. I do hope there is a 2nd chapter. It seemed so real. I wish I was the man. I'm a crossdresser and wish I could be involved in something like that. I would be submissive to what ever and enjoy every minute of it. Great story. Comment by evonne on 07/04/03 Really enjoyed your story. Well done.Perhaps spread the lines out a little to make reading a little easier and would love to have found out what Julie did forwith/to him. Comment by Night Wolf on 05/07/03 I want more of this story in my opinion it is not yet finish Please add more! Comment by Fiddler on 02/19/03 I have the same comments as Amber...you need to format better, with many more breaks, so your text becomes easier to read. Comment by Jill on 01/08/03 Very well written. Very sensistive. You have talent please don't keep it hidden. Good job. Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/15/02 Hi Alan. I just read your first story "The Uniform." Very interesting and captivating story. maybe you should write a Part 2 or maybe a sequel. Comment by Danielle on 09/26/02 A very impressive first story. It is very nice to know that there are people out there who have compasion and understanding rather then Hatred and/or self loathing. A great storyline with lots of opportunity for sequels. I, for one, hope that you write them. Comment by wendy on 06/23/02 Not bad at all for your first one Comment by butterfly on 02/10/02 loved your story, keep it up Comment by monica8484 on 12/29/01 Beautiful story. Hope to see more. Comment by Bobbi Jo on 10/11/01 I just loved your story and can't wait to see where it will lead. I am jealous and wish that it had happened to me. Comment by dorothy on 10/03/01 great story! as a crossdresser i love stories where women accept a man in panties and lingerie. Comment by Annalise on 10/03/01 This is great. Every girl's fantasy. What a wonderful story you have written, please don't let it be the last. Comment by Patti on 10/03/01 Very good start. I can't wait to find out where this leads. Comment by Phyllis Lane on 10/03/01
Comment by leesa on 10/03/01 what can I say? MORE MORE MORE. excellente. wish I could write this good. I have to be content to just read. Comment by Joli on 10/03/01 I loved your story. Wish it were me. Keep up the good work!! Comment by Sally Ann Francis on 10/03/01 I am a romantic, so I love storys that have heart in them. This is a fine first effort but you haven't allowed the love in you to get free.IMHO. I;m looking forward to your future writings, PLEASE DON'T STOP!!. Sally. Comment by Dixie on 10/02/01 So this is your first story? Well i must say it's pretty good I'd love to read more about how Ann and Julie feminize him more. Comment by Amanda on 10/02/01 Fabulous first story, I like the way the initial attempt to capture turns to loving acceptance. Keep writing! Comment by Amber on 10/02/01 Please format and well make more paragraphs instead of a couple large ones. |
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