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I really liked this story. It's the first of yours I've read but surely not the last!

Lots of sexual tension Dawn and that was nice. I Always like it when the woman is hot for her man. This is such a change of pace from so many stories.  Including lots of anticipation as to what in the world is Josh going to reveal next? Cheating at cards now that is really bad, just teasing. Very cleverly told, and though while not humorous very entertaining, fast moving and crisp.  Liked the premise as I consider it quite original.  Wish you had a working E-mail somewhere I'll keep looking. Thank you for a really fun and innocent story.

Hugs,

Kristi

Great tension, a boy who knows he's a boy while behaving as a girl and offering every excuse for acting and dressing as a girl. Great ending, I dislike a story that ends when the boy  "realizes that he was a girl all along."

GREAT!  All I can say is "been there, done that."  I ended up in a bra, sweater, skirt, mnakeup, and wig "boldly going where no man had gone before" (The girls wouldn't let me sneak, and "Star Trek" had just premired.) into the girls' dorm because I lost at strip poker.  . AND, like Josh, I cheated to lose :-)

A wonderfully off-beat story displaying a magnificent wry sense of humour.  This seems to be Dawn's first short story that is complete in one episode.  A wonderful read

   Hey. This was a pretty interesting story that delved into alot of tg fiction sterotypes. Pretty interesting.