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The Unofficial Biography of Kimmay
by G L Hudson

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Comment by Steve on 10/21/10
Thank you for writing as well as posting this tale. I'm just a regular person; but could it be that we see the birth of another author who has what it takes to get published in other formats? I think so. Great story and I like the research that shows you did into material for the story. I think I'd love to talk with you given your insight into certain matters as I see the same thing since 9/11. I wish you all the success that's possible.

Comment by Alison on 12/08/09
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Comment by Shari on 02/13/09
I thoroughly enjoyed this story.  The author told a good tale of how a 7 or 8 year old girl hung onto her dream into adulthood and made it come true.  I was glad to read that the story didn't degenerate into a femdom story but instead became a love story.  I can't wait to read Book 2 of the series.

I also liked the fact that somebody took great care in the editing and proofreading of this story.  I only found a few typos and a few misplaced adjectives and abverbs.  All in all, it was great read.


Comment by Briar on 09/28/08
Just re-read part 2.  Are you psychic or something?  Considering when it was written, you wrote about the Bush stock market crash.  What a remarkable coincidence, if that is all it was !

Thanks again for the whole story, which is truly an Epic Tale. Something one can return to over and over again.  This really is in a class of its own.

Briar


Comment by Yoron on 05/27/08
I don't go for this kind of manipulation GL.
It's wrong to base a marriage on lies, or any kind of relation for that sake.
'The Awakening' have a  cross dresser as its 'victim'.
And what our friendly 'Dominatrix' does there is more of lifting out the butterfly from its chrysalis.
That makes me somewhat more easy with the premises.
But this is manipulating at its basest and most crass plane.
And when introducing hormones it gets very serious.


So this gets me severely disappointed.

cheers
Yoron.


Comment by WannabeGinger on 12/04/06
Now i've read the second Storysite section (lost count of the chapters) and I just love the whole concept......  I can see I will be sad when the Tg element of the story takes more precedence - as I relish being a CD rather than going further..... but I love this!!  I have found there is a critical turning point in every story every written.. and in this one,  readers should guess..... when does Matt/Melissa become ensnared?... willingly.......   I say it's the moment the first roller goes in his hair!  No turning back!   Other people may differ.. for them it might be the first time he tries the corset... understandable and wonderful....  Readers! Please give your views!

Comment by WannabeGinger on 12/01/06
Just read the first chapter.... what an intriguing start...... I, too,  love the subtlety and the detail your writing shows..... I'm looking forward to lots of hair and beauty detail in the next chapter.  Brilliant!


Love & huggz, Ginger


Comment by Jayne on 11/25/06
This is the fist comment I ever made here.  I am very much in the closet.
For the first time I am moved to comment.

You have created a wonderful story, without any of the explicit sex or degradation I often see in others.  

Your subtle political commentary also hits the spot.

Thank you for several hours of very interesting reading!

Jayne




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