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The Unofficial Biography of Kimmay - Book 4: The Nature of The Matriarchy
by G L Hudson

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Comment by GLHudson on 02/02/09
This is a note for Briar;

Thank you very much for reading the stories and also commenting on them.
I really appreciate any feedback.  Most of the foreign sites mentioned in the stories I have actually visited, and that includes Switzerland.  In eastern Switzerland they have a national park that is indeed populated with elk.  Whether or not they are the same genus as in North America, I am not sure.  But a few years ago, I stood in the snow on a cold day late in September, and listened to them bugling. Their sound bouncing through the Alps was very impressive.  I saw the elk from a long distance, but they were not deer, chamois or goats.

As for the Swiss francs, Briar you are indeed correct about their current currency.  I set my story in the future and took a few liberties as to my guesses as what changes may occur over the years.

Thanks for reading and writing.

GLH


Comment by Briar on 01/28/09
Dear G L Hudson,

Am re-reading the third series and enjoying them.  This is nitpicking but everything else is so good I find it upsetting when something is not perfect - There are no Elk in Switzerland, you have to go to Sweden for those.  The Swiss have some red deer and fallow deer and roe deer, and mountain goats.  But no Elk.   Also they use Swiss Franks, not Euros.  I doubt they will ever give up their own currrency, they are too proud of their skills managing their own money - and anybody elses!

Sorry, but I am sure you can correct it in the Printed version when the Book is published, and when the Film of the Book is made.

Hugs,

Briar


Comment by Natalie on 08/23/07
I must say I've really enjoyed all of these stories.
I love the fact that I've been able to loose a whole day while reading.

I hope that there is more to come in the future.

Natalie


Comment by Nicole on 02/25/07
!!  Incredible  !!

I read all 4 books and am amazed.

BRAVO.

Nicole


Comment by Jaken8ter on 01/06/07
The thought, the scope, TOTAL WOW factor!!

Never have I been so compelled by a story - 3 stories in fact that I have taken the time to read every last bit.

I only wish this were true to our future generations.

BRAVO Author, BRAVO


Comment by Briar on 12/12/06
WOW

Have been reading from start to finish, this Epic.

Need some Time (no joke intended) to contemplate all of it, but there are no words that can express my admiration and gratitude to G L Hudson for creating and revealing to us this tremedous work of art.




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