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The Unveiling of Evelyn
by Evelyn D. Fairechild

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Comment by wendy k hill on 09/13/23
Truly one of the most affectionate stories ever written full of love and grace I am heartbroken that I may never read to the end but thank you for the enjoyment in the reading, I just loved it all Keep safe keep smiling Love Wendy Xxxx

Comment by Emmy on 12/10/15
 I've read some of the comments by other reviewers and I can say I agree.  Sadly I note the last review is about 4 years old.  I hope there is more to this story as it is erotically hypnotic.  The descriptions of the fabrics just give me the shivers.  I want to be Evelyn and enjoy the life she has, with the exception of the drugs.  I am not now or ever have been into drugs.
 If you're posting your stories elsewhere since Crystal's site is stuck in time, I'd love to know where.
 Thank you for what is available here and thanks to Crystal for all of her work.

Comment by No One in Particular on 11/23/11
Evelyn goes to live with his Auntie…Where Beverly and her partner Suzanne play Pygmalion to Evelyn's Galatea—with the difference that, in the George Bernard Shaw play and the movies adapted from it, Eliza Doolittle was possessed of a backbone. On one occasion, Evelyn contemplates taking his inheritance and setting up on his own (Evelyn is now about 20-21, and an adult in most jurisdictions), but meditates much more often on being a "kept and cosseted sissy," seeming to like the idea. I know this is fetish for lots of people in the femdom and sissy lifestyles, but it seems to me that Evelyn pays a high price in the way of continued loneliness (even among Beverly and her friends) and humiliation.

Evelyn begins with the determination to leave cross-dressing, drugs, and other childish things behind, but eventually succumbs to the pressure and temptation to return to them. Now that he lives with Beverly, it is no longer "don't be a baby!" if he expresses a desire contrary to Beverly's. Evelyn's resistance early on is met with anger and determination ("Those are exquisite things, Evelyn, and you're insulting us by not wearing them."); before long, Beverly's "suggestions" are followed without question, even if not quite without doubt. The iron fist inside the velvet glove is quite apparent in "Unveiling."

We also learn early on (so I don't think this is a spoiler) that Beverly and Suzanne are partners in more than just business. Being dedicated to their lifestyle together, they do not want even a hint of any masculine energy in their private lives. This is made clear with: "When I realized that you were to come live with us, I thought you might insist on living here with us on the masculine side… and I didn't know what I was going to do with that 'other' Evelyn… It had me so worried, because it would have changed my own life for the worse." Despite what Beverly wrote—about third genders being somewhere between masculine and femme—in one of her books that she conveniently left out for Evelyn to find, the intention is clearly to extinguish any masculinity that Evelyn may possess. This is about what Beverly and Suzanne want, not what is good for Evelyn.

Despite their determination to bring out the "delicate and beautiful lady inside of you…" Evelyn is not welcome to Beverly's 'ladies society' discussion group (we later receive a clue as to what sort of group this may be) because "it is a ladies-only group, darling, so if you don't mind, I'd like for you to stay in your room while we're meeting. It's so much easier that way." This is also typical of the lifestyle, which traditionally does not welcome TG people. Later that night, when Evelyn hears them enjoying each other, all he has to make love to is his pillows. When told more than asked, "You didn't mind being all cooped up in your room for all that time, did you?" Evelyn rationalizes and puts a brave face on it, but it is clear that this casual and callous cruelty hurts deeply. Evelyn seems more a dress-up toy to them at this point, than a human being.

Then there is Stephanie, who came to work at the Gilded Lily after hearing some of Beverly's lectures. During their outings and shopping excursions, she scares and humiliates Evelyn by dragging him into situations for which he is not yet prepared, and with "slip-ups" that nearly expose him—all while helping herself to plenty of clothing, probably at his expense (I can't help thinking that it is his inheritance that Beverly is digging into to fund these things). At home, she teases him sexually to the point of explosion, and then leaves him to sort himself out. The "yes/no" mind game she plays with Evelyn at the end of "Unveiling" is a masterpiece of subtle vindictiveness. Just in case any of her readers should fail to get what took place there, our author spells it out by narrating Evelyn's thoughts. We never do find out which way Stephanie swings when she takes someone to bed with her, but I'll take odds that it will not be Evelyn. (Apparently, we will never get to find out. In the BCTS rewrite, Evelyn learns under the tutelage of Mimi, and does not go to live with Beverly and Suzanne.)

Besides all this, Suzanne gets Evelyn started on drugs again. She then recommends Ativan to him, telling him, "They're pretty harmless, really – standard issue by most doctors. They're not physically addictive or anything – you'd really have to work at becoming dependent on them." If our author actually believed that, she had best stick to fashion design. All the benzodiazepines are physically addictive, and Ativan is especially pernicious. What a downer.

Coercion, isolation, and humiliation are themes that run through hundreds of TG stories. They run through this one, too, although Evelyn was far more subtle with them than most authors ever manage to be. If you like that sort of thing, this story is definitely for you. Given that there is still no real place for us third gender in-betweeners, my fantasy is to somehow gain at least honorary membership in the sisterhood (or perhaps enjoy a few of their privileges), not be dismissed and humiliated as some sissy-boy ersatz female.


Comment by Cindy Satin on 10/22/11
Evelyn is a beautiful and very lucky sissy, lots of money, an aunt who looks after her and wonderful taste in lingerie! I love the thought that she will have maids to dress her in future and I look forward to the electrolysis on her eyebrows and the removal of her Adam's Apple. Also , I think that a perfect sissy like her should really be measured up for some beautiful, expensive corsets so that her maids can then lace her up tightly to maintain a perfect hourglass figure at all times. More soon please!

Comment by Cindy Satin on 10/22/11
Evelyn is a beautiful and very lucky sissy, lots of money, an aunt who looks after her and wonderful taste in lingerie! I love the thought that she will have maids to dress her in future and I look forward to the electrolysis on her eyebrows and the removal of her Adam's Apple. Also , I think that a perfect sissy like her shoils really be measured up for some beautiful, expensive corsets so that her maids can then lace her up tightly to maintain a perfect hourglass figure at all times. More soon please!

Comment by Ricki on 05/15/11
Fantastic!!!!!
More please!!!

Comment by Lilly Hartford on 07/05/10
The writer has much depth of understanding of the mind of many who would empathize  with our graceful passion-driven heroine.  Stylishly written with so many elegant descriptions of objects, people, and emotions.  When might we expect more?

Comment by JDD on 11/07/09
Normally, I wouldn't comment on a story.  That said, these are extraordinary stories.  They are well written, sensual, seductive and erotic, and obviously, they arouse.  At the same time, they aren't simply vulgar.  The writer is skilled at writing, knowledgeable in so many ways, and presumably, particularly aware and sensitive of the subject matter.  The stories may be the best erotica I have read, and I commend them to you.  I also note the suggestion four more stories are to follow.  I sincerely hope so, and sooner rather than later.  To the author; congratulations and well done!!

Comment by Geena on 10/31/09
Evelyn,

I can't wait to read more about Evelyn & hopefully her growing romantic relationship with Stephanie! This ongoing story about a young TV & her understanding & loving female relatives & freinds, strikes a cord in many of us "girls"! Please maintain the TV/CD - GG reationships as this beautiful story continues to develop & grow!

Many, Many warm & swishy hugs!
Geena


Comment by  ALISON MARY on 08/15/09
 A lovely story,well told and every boy's dream.I just loved reading
the story until 1:30 this morning!!Thank you and God bless.Alison

Comment by Christine Myles on 05/27/09
Evelyn, I hope you're not going to leave us hanging for too much longer! This such a terrific story, so literate, so well written, so exciting, it BEGS to be continued! Honestly, this has to be one of the best, if not THE best, stories I've read on this site. Please give us more!

Comment by Erica Cecile on 08/28/08
A wonderful story, and SO well written!  So many stories I have seen by others have problems with spelling, grammar, punctuation, capitalizaion that interfere with the pleasure of experiencing the story, but I must say yours are as good as I have seen.  The story line and storytelling are also excellent, again adding to the sensual pleasure of the total experience.  I have only one request:  give us more!!!

Comment by Geena on 04/29/08
Oh Evelyn!

I love your onging story.  I always make sure I am dressed in my prettiest feminine dress, slip, panties, stockings and heels before I read them.  I've had so many lovely cums due to your lovely story! Please keep add another soon! I can't waitn to read about Evelyn and Stephanie having a sexy, but loveing bed time together.

Huggers!
Geena


Comment by Christine on 04/11/08
At LAST... part 3!!! Was it worth the wait? Definitely! My only complaint is that it's not longer!

Thanx again and keep em coming!


Comment by Nancy on 04/11/08
Wonderful and so enjoyable to read every chapter!  Please keep up the story!  We all wish we were in the story!

Many Hugs,

Nancy


Comment by allie on 04/10/08
I continue to be amazed at the exquisite quality and marvelous details of this wonderful story. It's like your living every minute with the characters. As I said previously, in my opinion it's one of, if not the best TG stories on this site, or anywhere else for that matter. I was particularly taken with the Yes-No game at the end of this new chapter, very clever.

Comment by Melissa on 04/10/08
Absolutely fabulous! Your descriptions are breathtaking. I have been anxiously awaiting this new chapter. Now I'm hoping for the next to appear even more quickly. You are a marvel.

Comment by Laura R on 02/03/08
I simply loved the series of four stories and can't wait to read more - do hurry and post more of Evelyn's feminization and also her erotic girlfriend experiences with Stephanie.  I really love reading this story and haven't seen anything as nice and feminine as this one - please keep it up!

Comment by Christine on 01/25/08
By the way, Evelyn, I noticed on the "What's New" page, you are shown as having five posted stories, but when I click through to your author page, there's only four that show up. Is there one missing?

Comment by Christine on 01/23/08
This has got to be one of the best stories I've encountered on this site in a very LONG time! The language, attention to detail, plot and character development are exemplary, all of which contribute to a very stimulating and exciting read! I rarely read multi-part stories, but believe me, I am more than willing to make an exception in this case, I will be waiting for the next installment with bated breath!

Comment by Allie on 01/16/08
At last another chapter in the beautiful saga of Evelyn. I've been waiting since September for this continuation. This is TG fiction at its absolute finest. I hope the next episode doesn't take so long. But if it does, so be it - it's worth the wait.

Allie


Comment by Barbara Jean Swallows on 01/16/08
Oh my.What awesome talent it is that you have.Once I began reading I was unable to stop.Please add more. Thanx.

Comment by Teresa on 11/20/07
I loved the stories and was really arroused by them, resulting in a rather soiled set of lingerie and dress.
i am sure this must have happened to evelyn, at least once.

Comment by sissystevie on 10/07/07
Evelyn, this story moves me in so many ways. It's beautifully written, beautifully described, and about such a beautiful boy-girl. A stunning work! Please do continue it.

Comment by Deedee Pauca on 09/29/07
Evelyn - believe me, your stories are SOOO erotic.  I've loved all three and can't wait for the next one.  If you have a moment, look up my stories here on Storysite - I think we write a bit alike.  I haven't written for a long time, but I sure enjoy yours.

Comment by Vivien Tena Britton on 09/22/07
All right, you must, just must absoulutely finsih this story!  I love it, all of it!  You have me on pins and needles waiting for this story to continue and hopefully dear it will be soon?

                  Vivie


Comment by Allie on 09/16/07
Evelyn:

Both your awakening and unveiling stories are suburb. This is the kind of TG fiction I truly enjoy reading. I hope the trials and tribulations of Evelyn go on for a long, long time.

Bravo!

Allie


Comment by dawn on 09/15/07
Truly a beautiful story.  Written with such feeling and detail. Please continue...please.  It is such a pleasure to read your work.  Thank you for your time and effort...!!



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