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The Unwitting Lure
by Mardee Louise Prynne

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Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 10/19/09
Hi Mardee!
I told you that you use much sex in your stories.
Everyone love sex, but in the right time! But I liked the story!
Kises.
Silvia.

Comment by riottgrrl on 04/18/07
Great story, in the 'fifties universe that Mardee favors writing in.

Although I don't think we are reading this sort of story for its period details, adding more local color would increase the verisimilitude with which Ms. Prynne writes.

Perhaps I have an axe to grind--I love urban stories, and I'm just dying for more stories set in New York, perhaps not the real New York, but the New York of a Norman Parkinson fashion photograph from the 'fifties. (Think "Autumn Fuchsia August 1957.")

At any rate, the plotting is interesting, and I hope there's more in this vein to come.




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