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Un-woman
by Jennifer White

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Comment by buy cheap oem software on 02/12/12
edNQaV Very amusing thoughts, well told, everything is in its place:D

Comment by Silvia. on 02/21/09
I am a girl, but I think men aren't bad. We have good fathers,brothers, uncles, boyfriends, and many others who are men and they're good persons.
Silvia.

Comment by Debilyn on 06/21/06
I don't think Jennifer is saying that the male sex is bad.  It's simply a celebration of those distinctive feminine attributes and privileges that make women different, but not inferior.

Comment by Jake on 11/03/04
I read alot of your work and I have to say that you do very good work but this one really didn't seem to be very good. It's not the fact that miruleen got turned into a man as punishment it was the fact that you made it seem so bad to be a man. cause I am a boy and I know that it isn't that bad to be a man. Anyway you do very good work but this wasn't the best that you could do in my opuion

Comment by Early June on 08/19/04
Wow! Tongue in cheek?  Reverse engineering.  What a punishment. You must have a sadistic sreak in you. This was a cute change of pace, a furtive trip into "might have been"  This story is so simply written it creates complex conflicts. Another job well done. Thanks.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/15/04
I am a TS and I have hated being male but my dear men do feel .Just they are not allowed to show it. Ask any girl who has watch a weepy with  the boyfriend husband .Oh just got something in my eye!! they say. I know men that are not girly but feel deeply.They love their wifes their kids and are loving kind men .Yes some men are unfeeling some women are too maybe not as many but they are there .Hindly was one of those women .A woman who helped  Ian Brady kill kids back in the 60s. Men are told to hide there innner self women are not. Its bloody hard for men.Nowaday even more so. But men are hunman and yes they feel just dont show it.



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