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Upskirts, Downskirts
by Jennifer White

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Comment by me on 11/12/10
this story is hot! i wish you would write more about being a pair of panties it is a fantasy of mine

Comment by gus on 10/10/10
I really like the story of the man being made into a pair of women's
panties.  Can write a story of a man being made into a women's purse
wallet and other assessories the go inside a women's purse.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/28/04
Edgar Lee Masters was also prolific writer, but he had only one major, excellent, compelling work, "Spoon River Anthology".  SRA grabbed readers in their guts and in their hearts and was life changing for many of them (me included).  We now know, with "Secrets",  that you are capable of the same.  With this present work, however, I would say  that "Secrets" is in danger of becoming your SRA, a one-of-a-kind.  I sincerely hope that this is not true and that you, unlike ELM with SRA, have more "Secrets" to write.



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