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The Vacation
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Early June on 08/03/06
Oh, how awful,  And scary!!  I have been in some strange places, where, if your plot had occurred, no one, absolutely no one, would be the wiser.  And Chloe?  It seems she set up the whole situation.  I am so sorry for him.  I will add though, he is far better off without her.  There is no way of knowing what other damages she may have caused him in the past.  Things can only improve from this low point.  Once she is out of the way he can grow in relative freedom, though he can never recover from the gruesome changes resulting from her terrible plot.
Once again, I thank you for allowing us the pleasure of reading your efforts.













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