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Vaingirls #1: Joyce's Story
by Jezzi Belle Stewart

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Comment by make money online on 09/13/13
HDA6L0 Enjoyed every bit of your article.Really looking forward to read more. Much obliged.

Comment by Zohaib on 01/25/13
well i think tht entire siaittuon cud hav bin avoided if u had avoided the ex-gf.tht was like totally an ambush.u wudve enjoyed ur night and the kiss mightve bin more enjoyable,cuz u wudve bin relaxed.and if it still had turned out the same way.yall mightve jus laffed it off.seraly

Comment by Dalthon on 01/23/13
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Comment by cheap oem software on 02/11/12
EfIaBA I do't regret that spent a few of minutes for reading. Write more often,  surely'll come to read something new!....

Comment by Dick Dunham on 01/19/04
Finally  got around to reading this one.  I usually don't read stories this long but I thoroughly enjoued it..Dick

Comment by gennieTV on 08/05/03
So nice to see the "forced fem" done with caring and concern. Oh if only I could take a month off to live like Georgie Ann ... Ahh the joys of youth.
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Comment by Nellie D on 06/28/01
A different view of a one parent family and the effects that his views cause. The four boys turn out as overly macho woman users and abusers. The youngest, a girl, isn't allowed her femininity. The story focuses on the youngest boy and the trouble he gets himself into by adopting his father's views.

The story is better than average with good writing and very few mistakes.



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