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Vanessa
by Jennifer White

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Comment by jjconn on 06/07/17
Rape is still rape including stealing a man's manhood against his will!! Al went to see Vanessa with good intentions not with rape or cruel intentions like Vanessa, hope she gets caught & gets her reward some there are some guys who would kill her for what she did to Al involentary!!!!

Comment by leelee on 10/02/09
I love stories about men being tricked into taking hormones and watching with unsuspecting horror as their bodies and minds change and they are helpless to do anything about it....In real life this has happened  but as I recall the men's minds were not changed and the women spent some time in prison   but the hormone damage had already been done.   When I masturbate I often pretend to be one of those unsuspecting males  being slowly turned into a beautiful woman.....trouble is ..no matter how I spin it  I emerge as a very male looking guy...ah but the fantasy is great while it lasts   Thanks for the story    !!!!

Comment by Diane on 05/31/08
Terrific... if it could happen that fast!!!

Comment by juliej on 04/18/08
needs more to this story a continuation good story

Comment by juliej on 12/31/04
a very good story but what a fool he was to fall into a trap and himself not fighting back it shows how women are very devious

Comment by Pervette on 11/17/03
Nice story, but considering how few males really pass when dressed,
I think Vanessa must not do a very big business. I hope she has
some alternative source of income....
.
--Pervy

Comment by Paula on 11/17/03
Didn't care much for how Al got trick to hormones but a well written story still



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