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Variations On A Busted Flush In Spades
by Slothrop

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Comment by Aleesha on 02/18/10
Not a bad story, certainly different. I would have preferred a different ending though.

Comment by DEE on 09/30/07
ABSOLUTELY ENJOYABLE STORY. GREAT LAUGHS AND GREAT DREAMS AND EVEN
MORE WONDERFUL DESIRES COME OUT IN THIS ONE. THANK YOUB FOR A PLEASANT
READ.

Comment by Nellie D on 02/20/04
An interesting story with a very nice outcome. What could have been an average run of the mill story with a common plot is presented differently and with good results.  



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