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Venus Envy
by Jennifer White

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Comment by juliej on 03/03/06
a great story and a very understanding family its amazing how things happen when you expieriment and get caught well done in the end it was his choice

Comment by Linda on 08/30/05
The story had potential but began with what I thought was an obvious flaw than stayed in my mind during the entire story.

The boy is ripping sister's clothing because he is bigger than they are.  A short while later, the girls are giving him some old clothes that no longer fit them because the clothes are too small for the girls.  Perhaps they were tired of wearing the clothing or the clothing was no longer fashionable.  But if he is bigger than they are, and they are too big for the clothing, then he is bigger than the clothing and nothing would fit.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/31/05
This was a nice twist with Brenda calling mom's bluff.  And mom was pretty cool, accepting Brenda's decision even though her plan had backfired.  Good story.



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