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Veronica 1.0
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Early June on 11/27/07
Good . Good.  Like all your stories I loved it.  Your irony is not rusty.

Comment by calamariee on 11/27/07
another fine job of writing.  

I like your style.


Comment by steve on 11/26/07
I loved the story.. I like all of your work. But this was special..thank you

Comment by Sarah H. on 11/26/07
Pretty nice story,all told. It could have had more details.

Comment by spacecase sweety on 11/26/07
I really like this story.
then again I like all the stories Jennifer White has, but
this one really did something special for me.

kind of reminds me of the non-TG erotic story "RETURN OF THE ULTIMATE LOVEDOLLS"




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