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Victoria II
by Dave Hicks

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Comment by Yoron on 05/24/08
Happy to read it :)
Very good and flowing perfectly.

You should seriously try to write..
Ah, more i mean.. No, not Roger, and that's with two o:s...
Isn't it?

No I'm talking about you
Yes I know your name isn't Roger...
Awh sh*

Keep on writing :)

Cheers
Yoron.

Comment by Pippa K. on 06/30/04
A seriously, and gloriously, demented little tale.  Woo-hoo!  Oh, crap!  I just spilled my Bordeaux...
Comment by The Cookie Monster on 02/11/03
When your are talking about the rot gut wine, are you refureing to MD 20/20 ? the wine that not only can you drink but degrease the wall too !
If you ever have consume wine you will fine you will be baying at the moon even if its not there. Remember drik it be for its eat though the cap.
Comment by satan smith on 01/31/03
loved it. everyone should read this funny story.
Comment by Briar on 01/24/03
Well, I really enjoyed this amusing tale.  I was worndering about the little R sign cropping up all tghe way thru, until the footnote came up.  Particularly liked the very last sentance, about Hell being a foreign corporation and all that!

Nice one!

Love,

Briar
Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/24/03
different and enjoyable good work on a great story
Comment by Tryntje Gerritszen on 01/24/03
And now for something completely different:  A great bit of humour!

Keep up the great work!
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