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Victorian Victoria
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Comment by ashley on 09/20/13
another reread of a beautiful story. Very envious of Victoria am I - - sigh. Comment by Cindysatin on 09/14/12 What a story! How I wish I was in Victoria's place. The corsets, the gowns, the heels; all absolutely beautiful. Comment by ashley on 10/03/10 great story Comment by Silvia. on 12/02/08 Great, I loved this story. Comment by Beatrice Black on 11/23/08 A simple tale filled with lavish details - the like of which i would love to experience first hand. I'd love to be in Victoria's shoes. And everything else, as well. Comment by VickyMephit on 02/24/08 While I like the Victorian feel, the story line and development is sparse. It almost feels more like a story outline than a fully fleshed story. Some expansion of the story would probably improve it. Comment by Antonia on 02/21/08 A quite exceptional story, in which, I am sure we would all like to participate, even now. How I wish I was Victoria with all those fabulous dresses, and the paid assistance. Only thing missing was her makeup and hair details. A very minor point though. Comment by Hayls on 02/19/08 I really liked this story. I think that you did it really well, you allowed the reader to get caught up in the Victorian fantasy which many of us have, without making it too unrealistic to lose our attention, or too restricted to lose the fun of the story. Well done! :) |
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