Makes me wish I were Marla.

Think this is my favorite story I've ever read!!  Keep up the awesome work!  :-D  Thinking of posting a review on my website ;-).

It was great!!! I loved it.

Not bad, but not good too!
Silvia.

I love to see bad people get what's coming to them in the end.

Im impressed a very good story a wicked way to do it but a great story

Wow, I have just read part one and I think this is one of the best stories I have ever read.  It is really hot and i love the images to.

so very impressed,, my gosh!!!!!!!  perhaps more soon!!! thanks so much

I am nearly speachless... This was the best story I have ever read..

All I have to say is DAMN!!! lol Never read a better story....

enjoyed your story melissa and renee.  it had a scary undercurrent and a good ending as marla formerly brian got her revenge on her former friends.  as they say with friends like those there is no need for enemies.  i was woundering after i read this if either one of you or both are t-girl(s) yourselves.  it seemed that the story had some ring of expearience to it as well despite it being a modern sexual fantasy.

An EXCELLENT story that has been excellently written!

If perchance you have not yet read this, I HIGHLY recommend it. If you have enjoyed it already; aber sicherlich, I understand why you did not recommend it to me - the dreaded guy/T girl sex that is its main theme. It is done so well, I took no exception to it. If you are going to bitch about that sort of sex - DO NOT READ THIS!! It is that simple! The sex is there throughout!

Well, surprise, surprise, I really enjoyed it! Immensely! Melissa is one of the BEST writers I've read; a gem among the detrius of the Web!. Damn fine writer!!! Great, well written story. Excellent techniques!

I cannot be over complimentary about this story! A few minor typos and I'd polish a little grammar, but darn few errors.

Ta-ra, fer a bits,
Karen Anne Summerfield

LOVED the whole story!  Forced fem, bondage, and darn well crafted!

The ending is excellent AND fitting, revenge can be sweet!

VERY MUCH looking forward to the next story!

Very professional! The best! More please!

Great story, and the photoshopped images really liven things up. Keep up the good work!

------- Super story (Parts I & II). Slick professional writing, esepcially in handling the time shifts (backstory inclusion, flashback). It keeps you interested and wanting to know the outcome. The eroticism is handled well, too. But I most enjoyed the good writing.

The story assumes that the three guys are amoral bad guys and goes from there, so I wasn't bothered by there not being a stated justification for their actions against Brian. He was vulnerable and available, which is "motivation" enough for a rapist.

The gaping, unforgiveable, error is that it's incomplete. (That is a hint.)

RJMcD

not sure why he desered it either but it is a good combination of images and story. Nice job done here.

What did Brian do to deserve this???
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--Pervy

Hi you two!

Nice to see your stories being re-posted, even if you are doing so gradually.  A lot of us wondered what happened to you since your site appeared to go away.

Hopefully storysite will allow you a creative outlet for some new stories again.