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Comment by Silvia. on 09/16/10
This is one of the worst stories I ever read! Comment by julie j on 03/16/05 the astory seems to be heading a long way with more to read in due course its intresting the way its done but being trapped by your sister &forced into something you dont want to do is a bit much their are many ways this story can go but i will wait to see wehich is chosen Comment by josie on 01/30/03 Big Hug! Terrific Part II, can hardly wait for part III. I loved every word of it. Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 09/21/02 I would think the anger over being forced - the brother at least believes he is being blackmailed - would work against taking pleasure in the transformation. Of course without the force there would be no transformation. catch 22 Comment by Nellie D on 08/27/02 I don't know where this story is headed but it has a very good start. I feel the sister is doing it with love not the most common reason seen in this type of fiction but maybe the best. I hope it stays that way. The writing is good with few flaws and the grammaris so good that the story flows. The plot and descriptions seem well developed. Comment by TinaCortina on 08/27/02 Can't wait for the future installments - the whole thing rushed by & b4 I knew it had ended. Soon please. Comment by Rose on 08/27/02 A great first part. What a lucky boy to have a sister like that. Comment by GFriday on 08/26/02 It's a very enjoyable story. I bet he'd make a first rate secretary for his sister! |
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