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Vonya Exposed
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Comment by Alexia on 05/31/08
Loved it! Comment by Ingrid on 04/29/04 I would also like to find out how the guys got into this position also. Don't worry about the punctuation! Just give us more. Comment by Chapel on 04/22/04 Ever wonder why there are a lot of publishing houses that employ a lot of editors? Impede not the flow of creativity with minutiae. Give her a break or some free editing services. Hey, I'll be Vonya's editor. Comment by Vonya Lee on 04/05/04 "puncuation"? I apologize that my grammar and 'puncuation' made my story unenjoyable for you. 'I look forward to reading better efforts...' Wow how condescending. I didn't write the story for my high school English class. Did you break out the red pen too? Comment by SassySue on 04/05/04 A very nice effort for a first time submitter. This is a very good little vignette that could be expanded into a more interesting story. I agree with Sheryl, we need to understand the wife's motivation and how Vonya got into this situation in the first place. Also, if Vonya Lee wants readers to really enjoy her stories, she needs to pay better attention to puncuation and grammar. Comment by Amanda on 04/04/04 Awesome, loving it, most exciting. Perhaps next story could be about the actual transformation. Keep it up. Comment by Sheryl S. on 04/02/04 Extremely memorable. Horrifically fascinating. Next time, let us know a bit more about the motivations of the wife in setting up this bizarre family situation. Comment by Angie on 04/02/04 Wonderful, simply wonderful, vonya! Best transformation to a bimbo story I have ever read! I request...nay, demand more! Comment by pauline on 04/02/04 your story is exciting and beutiful, Vonya, darling |
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