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Comment by check this out on 11/20/13
EZwWLM Awesome post.Much thanks again. Will read on... Comment by michelle rose on 10/09/07 I just want to thank all the girls who choose to read my stories. I try to write well, but, I am not a author. So, for those girls who are grammer nuts or just mean spirited, may I suggest, keeping your evil comments to yourself! Comment by grover on 09/08/07 Okay you already know you need some help with the grammar thing. About the story I liked and enjoyed it. The ideas were nice, but I too was wondering what was up. Back at the beginning of their trip, it said the one requested was on the way. Then Adie tried to prevent it. A test of some sort maybe? Adie did welcome her afterwards so no ill feelings or regrets. Good story perhaps there is more? Comment by The Punctuator on 09/07/07 Too many commas. Comment by (AJ) Eric on 09/07/07 Interesting, enjoyable story. I'm not clear, though, as to why Adie initially tried to prevent the transformation by keeping our protagonist out of the chamber, so that he had to disobey her to do what he'd clearly been brought there to do. |
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