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Votes for Women Chastity for Men
by Derry

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Comment by Dianna on 08/25/08
violence is not gender specific, neither is the capacity for it: this is shown in the fact that the women look down and belittle as well as spank/paddle/cane the men. These acts are acts of violence.

As long as misandry and misogyny exist: there will be no true equality.


Comment by The Phlourescent Leech on 12/15/04
Most historians of the 22nd Century agreed that the final demise of the former United States was directly attributable to the rise of the Chastity party.

After abolishing the U.S. Armed Forces and entrusting national security to a severly emasculated National Guard, the former USA was easily defeated by the invading army from Mexico.  Lacking any semblence of airpower or infantry, the Americans were unable to mount an effective defense.

His Excellency, Supreme Military Governor Juan Guittirez, formally dissolved Congress and the Supreme Court and personally supervised the execution of the President, Vice-President, and the entire cabinet.

-Encyclopaedia Galactica

Comment by derry on 12/02/04
i am sorry for the typing errors

HOWEVER i do think that the combination of a radical party gaining ground and a Second Constitional convention could cause all kinds of strange things to happen.

i am British but i do know quite a lot about American politics and law.

i guess that enough publicity about sexual violence and some stupid male comments could make A LOT of women VERY angry nad how can tell

Of course this is a fantasy. i do not ACTUALLY want to give up my civil rights

Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/02/04
My dear nice story but you dont get men.They would destory the world just so they don,t lose.You would 9/11 every week if that happened. BELIVE ME  men would just go ape. As a Dom TS  I have some male subs who love being under but most guys.No way.Also there is no upside for the men in this world. i THINK YOU COULD SET UP A SUB MALE Dom female city with like minded people but to take over the US. Yes I can just see Billy Bob in his pick truck going along with that sort of world.

Comment by leah on 11/30/04
Well, Derry!

I think maybe you DID in fact bear down somewhat and apply your writing skills better. No one's perfect, but it was both funny and disconcerting to see an election characterized as "exiting" rather than "exciting."

However, we now enter into the world of serious US politics and tampering with the US Constitution. Obviously, government was not your best subject in high school, because not even in a fantasy should so many things be fouled up beyond all recognition.

Several deep breaths! Blood pressure back to near normal... If you are going to go into something so arcane (and important) as revamping the government, you absolutely must write in more detail. The first part of this story is 250% the length of the second part. I would hope that even a fantasy would indulge in enough detail as to make your efforts approach the realm of the plausible.     Cheers!

Comment by Patti on 11/28/04
Loved your Story!!!  I just think a Role Reversed World would be FANTASTIC!  The Women's Army and the men with no Voting or Office Holding Rights was Delicious!  Keep up the GREAT work!

Patti



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