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The Vulvoid Transform
by Lisa James

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Comment by i love pron on 12/20/18
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Comment by lucy ann on 05/15/17
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Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/04/14
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Comment by crorkz matz on 08/03/14
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Comment by Karen Kay on 06/03/13
I've read a lot of books in my time but these four books are priceless.  I've read them over and over again.  I'll bet there are a lot of readers that wish they were as lucky as all those guys.  Keep them coming Lisa -- your tops.

Comment by toptops on 01/22/13
wxChSr Been a busy weekend, but I took a little time to refill the “Gun Death?” magazine as it ran dry with this morning’s post. Was talking about a few of the upcoming stories that I’m particularly impressed with, and she

Comment by nickna on 03/17/12
it made me masterbate{btw im a boy}

Comment by hoolio on 02/10/09
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Comment by Joann on 04/04/05
I don't read many stories like this on the internet.  This is the best one I have read so far.  In my opinion I think you have overdone the horror aspect a slight bit and you could tone done on the X rating a little but I like the general theme I.E. the helpless condition of the men.  I think you should get more women actively involved in transforming the men.  I'm pretty sure they could come up with some good comments to the men as they transform them.  Maybe you could introduce a large machine or device that the men could be placed into to transform them as they are slowly transported through different portions of the machine.  Each section  of the machine would have a different transforming effect in the total process of feminization.
Let me know what you think.  I have more ideas.  Email me and we can discuss them.  

Comment by d on 02/03/05
yes,original story line,full of hot scenes ( very good), a bit repetitive theme in that the transformation scene replayed without much variation. the story was sexy and scary as hell and i wish that could have been more  developed. great visual experience. thank you and please write much more.

Comment by Denver on 11/08/04
This is one of the most original transgender horror stories I have read. I especially like the booths where they were changed into vulvoid women. The only thing would suggest is to ready about them being locked in the booths. Anyway, Keep up the good work.

Comment by Rena on 01/19/04
Very good story but even though you claim that it is a Three month gap you left out the One char in part 5 that got changed into a girl for rapping another female in the prisons there!  I think Part 7 should be used to close that gap up as well as have the agent finish his dictating of what was going on!

Comment by aka.Lea on 12/29/03
You have a great series going with Vulvoid Transform.What happens if someone was willing?(or wanting to become female?) Just a couple add-ons for you.Keep these going!

Comment by Anonymous on 12/29/03
I read this a while ago and I have to say that this is the best piece of the year. Creative, intense and get to the point. Just want to say thanks and please keep it up.

Comment by Night Wolf on 10/30/03
I'm waiting for part 6 please continue this one It's really great!

Comment by Amber Chalise on 05/14/03
Love how you bring the reader in to the victim's mind and how they hate being a girl. I would love to see the series go much further.

Comment by Patricia Pendragon on 04/27/03
Keep it coming - pardon the pun - th story looks as if it caget very interesting. I like the thought the military are playing with such interesting "weapons".

Comment by A friend on 04/15/03
Simply awesome!  I loved it!
Next time, I want to see the "living bras"!

Comment by Paula on 04/14/03
look forward to part  2 of the series.



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