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Waiting
by Minty Fresh

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Comment by Silvia. on 12/19/09
Bad story.
Silvia.

Comment by whyguys on 04/01/09
Nothing wrong with the forced tv content here, especially when it is implied that the domination and feminization shall increase at the discretion and whim of the Dominant Female protagonist.  Further chapters delving into her manipulation and retraining of her charge WOULD be highly welcomed.

Comment by juliej on 01/26/06
an interseting story but neeeds more elaberation &it was to short good start

Comment by a guy on 01/24/06
a rich abusive woman Dominates a submissive man in a cruel wait.

as far as i can tell, the TV component is just another humiation to the sub by the Dom - and really has no part in the story.



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