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Walkies
by Ray Kitten

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Comment by Silvia. on 09/18/11
Why do you wrote something so disgusting like this?
Shame on you!

Comment by Bruce on 10/24/09
If thats the first day what the heck has she planned for the other ten????whew geting a cold drink from the fridge while i think about that

Comment by julie j on 11/01/04
a nice story but the warning is beware what you bet for and the consequences of losing another good story well done more please

Comment by Susan Pauline Bauer on 04/18/04
Dear Ray,

Another nice story. It flowed very well. To me, the only un-realistic item were the grapefruits. There's no bra to keep them in. Sooner or later, they would roll out or down but, then again, this is fiction. I couldn't, "do," being a cheerleader. I love my high heels. I haven't had sneakers since high school. Some year I'm going to enter the, High Heels Race, in Washington, D.C. As your tale unfolded and our humiliated heroine was all bound up and his panties taken as a souviener made me chukle.

Keep Writing.

Susan

Comment by Dick Dunham on 02/25/04
Loved your new story.  I like the crossdressing/humiliation scene.  Keep them comeing.

Comment by Sissi Riki on 02/19/04
That was one hot story.Ten more days? Sounds like the humiation is just starting to pay off his debt, butt I know how you kike those endings that just keep us hanging and wondering what happens next, it's creul butt interesting. I love your stories. Sissi Riki

Comment by Sheryl S. on 02/18/04
Nice vignette.  Your storytelling technique is excellent.



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