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Walk in the Snow
by Charles Parker

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Comment by cheap backlinks on 07/18/14
6Icaji Awesome post.Thanks Again. Really Cool.
Comment by Silvia. on 07/16/11
When you finish the story, I will read it!
Comment by Jen on 05/27/10
I too would like more.
Comment by Teri Lee on 11/25/07
Very well done.
Comment by Annabelle on 10/29/06
Good short and to the point stories, hey just as they are male to male rated x I'm happy
Comment by Mandee on 01/08/06
This is a very sweet story.  It captures the heart of the girl in this boy obviously born like so many of us in the wrong body.  As his girl self takes over he does things not fully understanding how he could be doing them.  Well HE is not- SHE is!
  However- her tears will help her with the policemen.  Once his identity is established - they will guard his secret and hir romance with Edward will bloom.  I just simply know that.
Hugs and thanks
Mandee
Comment by julie j on 05/06/04
a great start to what can be a very good story i wonder how he will
talk himself out of this even though its his parents house the next inslallment will be very good and I am looking foreward to it in due course well done well written
Comment by julie on 03/07/03
a good start look foreward to the next installment
Comment by Francesca on 02/04/01
A very good start,nice short and to the point episodes,
Comment by Lesley on 01/01/01
A very good beginning.  I can't wait to read more.
Comment by paul jutras on 12/31/00
way to write a good story. Keep the multipart ones short like you are doing so that you don't damage a good tale.


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