5VBEDi This page certainly has all the information I needed about this subject and didn at know who to ask.

 It took me a long time to re-discover this story.  It is great!  

Sociopathic... Yes, I think our author has quite the inside track on sociopathic... One can only hope that his writing is a sufficient outlet for the poisons in his veins, and that he lives at least a thousand miles away from anywhere, or anyone...

Small nitpick: (78-rpm) phonograph records prior to and during WWII were not made of vinyl, they were made of an extremely brittle compound composed of shellac mixed with various fillers. Vinyl was introduced after WWII, and mostly in the new 33-1/3-rpm format.

You have created a magnificent tale, which has verisimilitude.  The characters are fully three diemensional beings, the historical backgound is surprisingly  close to what actually happened (some of which has not been made public still and which neither you nor I should know about, so I am wondering just how you knew or were you guessing?).

The breadth of the tale is vast, the character of Willy, a poor lost child blown hither and thither in a mindless catastrophe that was out of hisher control, had true pathos.  

You are brilliant.  Please write more stuff of this calibre.  And thanks for sharing it with us all.

Some editing needed where you used "as" instead of "has" ( est vous Francais?)  Es war ein sehr gutes geschicht.  Es hat mir gefallen.

Briar

I too just stumbled on this amazing series of short stories.  And I must say, I was simply blown away and so compelled by the magnitude of what I read that I could not leave without comment.  These short stories are some of the best ventures in erotic LITERATURE I've ever read. Yes, Literature!  This writting is so forceful and compelling.  Awash in eroticism that set the imagination ablaze.  What I find obscene about what has been offered here is that the efforts haven't been given their due.  Please provide more, and should you ever publish (if you haven't I would advice submitting a resume), please put me on your mailing list.  Thank you!!!!
Peter
- Jason, if you have posted elsewhere on the web (exluding fictionmania) could you please share it with us - here in response?  Your e-mail isn't functioning, so I hope I find you reviewing these comments.

I totally enjoyed your story.  Your ability to include such detail is remarkable...show's a good grasp of history.  I wonder how you came upon the names of the characters...coincidence?

You're an excellent writer.  Keep up the good work!

Aly