I just read your story and loved it.  I see it's been awhile since you wrote it and I want to know if you ever added to it.  If so please tell me where I can read it.  Thank you for your time.  

Kelly

This is the best type of CD story. I love it that our hero has a loving and caring girlfriend. And that he has sex with her. It is just the right mix of cross dressing and sexual interest.

Darryl, myself being an American of British descent; I love the descriptive narratives of the English country side and culture. Your writing has a subtle and proper style, which I find to be very entertaining. You are very talented! Keep up with the good work. Bravo!

thanks for a great story I really like stories that does not have the main character to suffer a hell of lot of humiliation. Please can you hurry up and post the next installment

I liked this story a lot, stayed up late finishing it because I couldn't bear to put it down. Please continue

A most fascinating story.
Maybe a little to much of those 'sweet nothings' for me.
But all in all a very pleasant read.
And those two seems to fit together so well :)
Also I must point out that it is nice to see a story about cross dressing without humiliation and abuse.

Thanks for that.
cheers
Yoron.

Although I didn't like the sexual parts at all, the story and its Catholic setting reminded me of something I read on the Internet a few years ago about a co-ed Catholic high school in Ireland that required all male and female students to wear pleated kilts (really, skirts) as part of the required uniform.  I consider that sometimes, and think about how much more enjoyable and less hellish my Catholic elementary and secondary schoolboy days would have been if I could've gone to class each weekday in a skirt. Including going to Mass and kneeling before the Eucharistic Presence in a skirt with no one from God on down thinking ill of me.  We boys would've really appreciated girls more and what they experience having to wear garments that blow up in the wind, expose the legs, and are in easy danger of being torn off.  I think it would've had a general calming, sweet, sobering effect on the students. Sadly, I heard that school required the guys to switch to gender-appropriate trousers-only back in '94. Personally, I would've allowed all the boys and girls to wear their choice of either kilts or pants, without sacrificing anyone's individual sexual integrity. But that's just me.

This story had me hooked from the outset, the characters are three dimensional, exciting and real. Darren never loses his identity yet evolves into something he wants. Linda too has found something she wants and assists rather than pushes the transformation. Very clever, well written and please keep writing

beautiful story.  relives many of  my fantasies.  looking forward to next part.

Fantastic story, one of the best I have read, the pace is fantastic and although, as other comments state, the sex is a little on the young side I felt you did not over do it with detail. I can't wait until the next story is published it has been a most enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.

What a great story! The pacing was just great: just gradual enough to be conceivably credible. As some others have noted, the sex was premature; but having said that I really enjoyed the rapport the kids had. More more more!!

Great Story you did a very nice job on all of the parts and I hope you keep working on the story.

Just finished reading your story. I like it very much and I hope you will write some more. I will be looking for it.

I enjoy stories as this one (even though the characters are to young for the advance sex,just wasn't my cup of tea} .Still all in all it a lovly story.Love to hear how  Darryl's coming out at school for the Lord so-and-so and the reactions of the others towards him/her in skirts.Please continue the story and at least bring it to a closer.Just hate beening left hanging.Oh i use a text to speach program that (for me) let's me live the character part.

Dear Darryl:

   Good choice to use something you are familiar with. A very delightful tale as acceptance and love are always in favor.  Of course we have to find out about the budding romance, you cannot leave us hanging for ever.   Nice to see a girl who knows what she wants and it is a boy who dresses as a girl. Self discovery always can make and interesting tale and you have definitely succeeded. Both Darryl and Linda have a lot to learn about themselves and each other so keep us posted please.

Hugs,

Kristi

I enjoyed this story very much. It did not have a dark side for which
I was thankful. I liked that interplay with the nuns. Keeping it
positive was a good touch. I, too, would like to see Darryl's
development, especially having to deal with his hair as it grows.
The continuing relationship with Lynda would also be enjoyable.

Wow! a very good story.  You will need more than a trilogy. suggest that you take Darryl/Darren thru school as a girl and then pair Darryl off with Lydia as wife and wife in the end. A Pentology pewrhaps

what a lovely story , do continue with this tale as in my opinion it much nicer than many others on crystals site, love terri

Well Darryl, Here is my response. Good going, old chap (er lass?) you write well. And yes, please do write the third installment of the continuing exploits of the netball champions. Such as, having Darryl full time in the girls school uniform and being in the girls netball league. I am so happy that this story is full of love, understanding and support for Darryl's abilities.

Barb

Great story. best I have read since Daphne's Lipstick discipline, and that is praise indeed.


Love Bobie

Itīs a great story, please continue it. Bests regards Paola

I really loved thsistory. I found it very enjoyable. I can't wait for the next installment. Please keep up the excellent work.
Cathy

Wonderful story.

Not flawless, but so?  It is just the right mixture of sweetness, sex, and tension for me.  I also love no boy/TV relations.  I suspect at some point Darryl will have to learn to turn the boys down, and perhaps 'come out' as a lesbian :)

I look forward to a lot more about Darryl and Lynda.

  I like this story and found it plausable except: 1) His whole class was told about the deception; I found it hard to believe that no one talked. 2) It was pointed out that there was no rule against a mixed team, so no deception was really necessary.  Darren could have worn the uniform and all would have known it was only because that was the rule; he did not have to pretend to be a girl.
  I would like to see Darren have some success at something while dressed as a boy so that there is real conflict as to which way he decides to go - or maybe he enjoys the best of both worlds, like a lot of CDs.
   I am looking forward to part 3.

This is the kind of story that appeals to me.  I only wish my introduction to sex had been as smooth.  It is the way I would like to see the male/female interaction develop.  Many of the potential dragons weren't and so there was some suspension of belief, but overall it is a beautiful story.  Unlike some of your other readers I'm not looking forward to a boy/boy coupling.  It was unpleasant when it happened to me at age 11 and is still a source of anger. I carried a gun for several years in hopes of arranging an "accident", but the opportunity never occurred.

A very well thought out storyline. Extraordinarly sweet. I thought it was a bit heavy on the sex, but then I remembered all the stories I used to hear from my girl friends that attended Catholic school ... in that context it was kinda short on sex, LOL.

Also, just the right mix of discriptive text and dialog. I can never get that right, myself. Excellent pacing, and very believable characters.

Can't wait to see Darryl's coming out at school for the Lord so-and-so.

Please continue.

Oh, Yes, Darryl...
 This is one of the best-written, cleverly dramatic and plausible of all the boys-on-girls' teams tales I've ever read.  Thank you and please continue soon.  We note that his Mother  may becoming ever more active in helping Darryl/Darren to develop all his girlish traits in a fulfilling, 'natural' way.  And as a lover of long hair, I too can hardly wait until his hair grows down below his shoulders.  Will he be dressing as girl fulltime at school ?

Cheers from TinaB.

A lovely story, Darryl. As an American, I enjoyed the opportunity to visit the English schoolboy/girl culture. I'm so glad that Darren was invited and not forced into taking on a female role, both by his mother and by Lynda. I do look forward to following Darryl's career!
emmie dee

Darryl,

I am not sure I can hold out until the next part of this story is posted.  I held my breath for a while.... but that did not work... now I am sitting in front of my PC and patiently waiting... not daring to leave in case I might miss it!  Maybe in a few weeks someone will come looking for me and find my skeleton sitting...  still waiting.

Great story!

Zip

Dear Darryl,
I think you have the makings of a very cute, continuing story line here.  You have already hinted that Lynda wants h/ir to stay in skirts and that with the summer league about to start.. they will still need h/ir to field that position in the game..  

I for one look forward to watching Lynda and Darryl going all the way thru upper grades (high school) with Darryl attending as a girl.

I think my favorite stories are the plausible ones, & this gets
high marks for plausibility.  Darren isn't really crazy about
what he wears, although he admits it's comfortable.  Mostly he's
persuaded by Lynda's response to him.  Her reasons for liking him
that way are also about as plausible as you can manage in a story
of this sort.  So I didn't feel I needed to "suspend disbelief"
much at all.  And although sex with a boy is always an exciting
plus in such stories, sex with Lynda was even better.  Altogether
a heart-warming story.  Your characters are real people with whom
I can identify.  If you can sustain this all the way through a
trilogy, you'll have a real triumph here.
.
--Pervy

Wow!  I just finished this story and am left wanting.  Wnating more that is.   Darryl...I sincerely look forward to more of this storyline.  I also hope that Darryl will meet a boy just so we can see his/her reactions.  I know Lynda may get jealous, but hey that could work nicely.  Build some tension you know.

Anyway.  Well done and I  hope to see  more of your work soon.

Starhawk

Very nice and well written story, it just captures the reader's imagination. I've never come across this author before but the quality of the story is fabulous. I take it that the comment at the end of part two about it possibly becoming part of a trilogy means that these two stories collectively constitute part one. However if this is the case I can't wait for parts two and three, well done.