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Wearing Clean Underwear
by Aneleise Matthews

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Comment by Johnny on 02/24/19
Good story!  Your writing is very good.  Keep it going!

Comment by julih on 12/14/12
great story revenge is sweet it very belivable

Comment by Leia on 04/20/11
Excellent story, very believeable and exciting. Thank you.

Comment by Silvia   (from Brazil) on 06/25/10
Good for us readers that you didn't wrote nothing more.
Silvia.

Comment by Silvia. on 06/25/10
I agree with Barbara Lynn Terry.
This is a bad, horrible, terrible and disgusting story.
Bad,bad,bad,bad,bad..................................
Silvia.

Comment by juliej on 01/03/09
good story

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 10/16/08
Oh my, poor Kerrie; a fate worse than death. At least my MIstress has left my now useless manhood intact, for all the good it does me caged in its chastity device. Yes, poor Kerrie, indeed.

Comment by john on 06/22/08
nice one but poor man.

Comment by juliej on 11/08/07
intersting story hard going but good

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 08/31/07
Hi Aneleise,

My name is Barbara, and I am a post op, M2F TS. As many X-rays as I have had, and the hospital staff knowing my insides are male, I have never ever been made fun of by hospital staff, including housekeeping, radiology techs, phsyical and occupational therapists, and even visitors visitng the other woman in my room.

If any nurse, doctor, or other staff member was to do something like this in a real hospital, they would not only be fired but would be prosecuted and sent to prison, because what you describe in this story are multiple felonies, committed callously
by health care professionals.

Now while the next of kin (wife, sister, mother, brother, aunt, uncle, father) is allowed to sign releases for operations if the patient cannot, it is not allowable to perform srs to a patient who is not in need of it for life saving purposes. And no doctor I know of would even entertain such an idea anyway, because of the fear of losing his/her medical license.

Also a psychiatrist does not automatically assume psychosis because of a patient claiming that he is really a man who has been changed into a female without his permission. You only have one session described here, when it takes many sessions to determine psychosis, and in a state hospital for a week. A Week? Not likely. If a psychiatrist finds psychosis is present, and finds commitment is necessary, it isn't for just one week. That can only happen if the patient is self admitted, which doesn't happen any more today, even in 1998 when this story was written.

I read this story in the hopes that justice would prevail, but I was totally disappointed. The others who think this is a very good story, just have no clue that these things do not happen in hospitals where you have a lot of other people (staff and visitors) moving back and forth all the time. And you cannot trust everyone, just because a few of the staff believe their patient to be a cross dresser or transsexual, which in their minds is perverse.

In my experience throughout the years, this story is just so unbelievable it defies definition.

If this story is true, I would like to know what hospital does things this illegal and where that hospital is. If this isn't a true story but complete fiction, I'm sorry but it falls short of believability for those of us who know the law regarding health care professionals, no matter what country or US state it is in.

Now while a doctor can perform srs to save an accident, or cancer patient's life, the way it was done here, is not plausible.

I'm sorry this review isn't what you would have liked to see, but I had to let you know that having been a legal secretary for many years, I am appalled that any hospital could be so callous as not to have the patient's welfare to heart.

Love & hugs,
Barbara


Comment by leighlea on 05/17/07
Oh what a delicious story  but  I would have made the ending different so Kerrie would get even.  Kerrie would be so beautiful and perfect as a woman that JASON would fall in love with her and force his now wife to serve Kerrie as a lesbian lover too  but your ending was great.

Comment by slavetoby on 03/25/06
I think this is a very good story. The start and his lingerie were a nice idea.It would really be a starter to a second part. Keep it up

Comment by juliej on 12/15/04
this story is very good its a heck of a way to get treated with no explanation but it seems like a set up well with ending up as a woman what a way togo his wife thought he was dreesing they way he wanted to and far from the truth he ended up as a perminant woman it smells like a set up  great story welldone

Comment by Jane Hudson on 11/27/04
Tell me the hospital please I have had to jump through hoops to transition. Good story but no one heard of law suits.

Comment by SassySue on 11/26/04
Thanks for posting this story.  I found it erotic and enjoyable, although the punishment seemed a little severe considering the "crime" and the twist revealed at the end.

Keep up the good work!

SS



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