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Wearing Clean Underwear Revisited
by Danielle L. Richards

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Comment by Lisa Kaufmann on 07/15/09
Great story. Always like it when a true bitch gets it and does not see it coming. Kerrie sounds to good to be true and it would be terriffic if we all could turn out the same way, beautiful, sexy, smart and full of common sense.

Comment by Calamity on 07/23/06
I agree with 'A Friend', your work is difficult to read due to the formatting errors.  The biggest one I could see is that each time a different person speaks it should begin in a new paragraph.

The other thing I wanted to critique was the tone of the story.  It was much too giddy for the dark nature of theme.

I really like your ideas as put forth in the summeries but the above issues keep me from enjoying the story.  If you could fix these issues, you'd have some awesome stories.

Regards,

Calamity


Comment by Aneleise Matthews on 02/21/06
Dear Danielle.
Not quite the direction that I had in mind for hapless Kerry but it's flattering that my story has inspried you to write.
xx aneleise

Comment by A friend on 07/16/05
please - shorter paragraphs - I'm sure there's a great story in there, but I couldn't find it.



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