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Wedding Belle
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Comment by thisisme on 07/21/13
I like sentimental stories not violent or abusive stories but I can see both liking this story and thinking it needed a bit more work. It did have holes as colleen expressed. Comment by Jill on 02/15/09 This is a good story, because Hans is a asshole and deserves a worst fate. Comment by Jill M I on 10/20/04 Reading Colleen's comments makes me want to be judgmental of her and you. Comment by Colleen on 08/05/03 What a disappointment! Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/04/03 Good story, nice twist. This was just the type of ending I like, where the hero(ine) comes to love being a woman, a strong independant woman, and gets revenge on the ones who forced her and wanted to dominate her. I would like to know what happens between Astrid and her parents. Are her folks good guys or bad guys? |
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