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Wedding Bells
by Danielle Gee

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Comment by Tachia Blue on 03/19/13
One of the most powerful love stories I have ever read. Girl, you have the best of all worlds my dream story.  WELL DONE

Comment by DeeDee Clark on 12/07/11
I know that Crystal has stop publishing stories. But I throuly enjoyed this story. I, like the others before me enjoyed it very much, I also wish there were more. All My Love for you becoming one of my favorite authers.   DeeDee Clark

Comment by antonia on 04/06/07
A sweet story with a good flow to it.  
Personally I cannot THINK what the last commentator is talking about.  From the 'English English' perspective the sets of 'inverted commas' are about right.  Whatever 'elipses' are in 'American English' is not understood 'on this side of the pond.'   If you mean 'brackets' say so.
As Winston Churchill said "We are two great nation DIVIDED by the same language,"  and this division seems to get bigger daily.

Comment by Janice on 04/01/07
I enjoyed your current episode of Dani's story. I hope that you will continue her "life" with other chapters later. Hugs

Comment by Heather on 04/01/07
I throughly enjoyed this next chapter in this wonderful story as much as the first two.

I can't wait for the honeymoon giggle giggle and im sure there will be surprises for both Kathi and Dani hehehehe.


Comment by Denise Em on 03/31/07
I almost didn't read this, because of the "X" rating, but something about the synopsis ...

It's a lovely, sweet story ...

that DESPERATELY needs editing.  

Punctuation is your friend, but excessive use of elipses makes your characters sound as though they are perputually out-of-breath.  A "full stop" (period) is as much a pause in conversation as is the elipse and was way underutilized here.

I do hope you'll submit a corrected version.  It's too nice a story to be handicapped the way it is.

Deni




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