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Wedding Daze
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Kelsey on 12/17/08
I'm sorry, but the Wedding Daze was really confusing, and so I didn't enjoy it as much. And I didn't understand the epilogue hardly at all, you need to explain more, but not confusingly. I THINK it was a good idea to start with, but maybe not, can't tell from your story.

Sorry for the negatives again.

Sincerely,

Kelsey

Comment by Jane on 02/24/07
I love your stories
Comment by Danielle L. Richards on 02/22/07
Jenny Jenny Jenny!

  Hey! Girl In your universe how do you cheat on your wife BEFORE you get married.
  No, let's face it! This is just another excuse to be A queen bitch. You just like to hurt people, don't you? You don't even NEED a valid reason. You can just make one up! You are not a very nice person. It must be a living HELL for you not to have any friends!
 Hint! Try being a little closer to human and you might be surprised! But then again maybe not....You are pretty well gone.
  I do kinda feel sorry for you but I don't want you for a friend! You do terrible things to your friends, neighbors, anybody who dares breathe your air!

    Go get some help girl! These stories you write are not helping. You get meaner with each one and your victims are more and more often poor innocents!


                   Dani



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