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Weedy Boys Have More Fun
by Lauran Travis

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Comment by Sailor on 07/21/11
You saved me a lot of hsalse just now.

Comment by Trevion on 07/19/11
Wow, that's a really clever way of thiknnig about it!

Comment by jacki r on 05/08/07
The meaning of 'prevaricating' is more complicated than that.

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 01/23/06
Pleasant story.

The last few paragraphs seem rushed, and I'm not clear on what George's mother knows about all this, since he says he was changing clothes at her house at first.

Also, "prevaricating" means lying, not stalling, as your context suggests you meant.  (One more, though it's a common error these days: the term should be nerve-wracking, not -racking.)

Eric



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