efjota I used to be suggested this website by way of my cousin.

Love the story, would love to be able to check in. I bet we all would love to be part of the training and actionb

Loved this story.  Loved the interaction with the cops, especially the one who is in the closet.  Can hardly wait for th next installment. Please don't make us wait to long.

Could I check in? Do you take reservations?

Love it!!!!

Wonderful story - Can't wait for the rest

Don't keep us waiting too long

Great story !! i love it.  Can't wait for more.  Thanks

I agree with the other reviewers: this is an excellent, inventive and highly erotic story.  I eagerly look forward to reading future installemnts.

Keep up the good work!

SS

Lovely story so far. I'm really looking forward to the next part. As i'll be staying in a cheap hotel room myself tonight, and looking forward to an evening of cross-dressed exhibitionism and bondage, your story is an inspiration.

bRILLIANT, CONCEPT, WONDERFUL START.
IT INSPIRED TO COME UP WITH OWN VERSION, DIFFERENT SCENARIO, SAME CONCEPT, HOTEL OF C/D.  I MAY WRITE IT IF YOU HAVE NO PROBLEMS WITH ME DOING SO

My dream come true! Please continue this incredible beginning.

WONDERFUL BEGINNING!  And if you've ever seen my comments before, you know I don't give praise where it isn't deserved.  Great idea, wonderful treatment, great flow, good grammer - overall excellent.  I have high hopes for where this story is going.

-Ami

Love this!  As someone who travels for business, with a second suitcase, I could really see my self in this story.  Keep it going, maybe some more forced action, maid service... love it!