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We're Still the Champions
by Darryl Foster

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Comment by bb on 10/26/12
pleaase wrie tthe thid pary

Comment by Harold on 05/07/11
I loved the story can't wait for part three, I think Darryl should decide he wants to be a real girl, she could then go to school in her gingham dress i think his mum would love him to be a girl so would we.

Comment by Markie on 07/02/10
Loved the stories. Great pace and easy reading. Looking forward to the continued journey - please dont stop. Maybe a shopping trip for the girls together with a shared changing room .... trying on each others clothes and other things!
Please keep up the great work

Comment by robert on 12/08/09
 I really loved this story.  I hope that you do decide to finish this triology. Darren is only just beginning to explore his feminine side and should be allowed to develope it further.  Maybe in the next chapter the school could change it policy allowing him and the other boys to wear skirts and dresses for the appropriate school terms.  This would allow him more time for exploration as well as the other boys of whom none has been introduced.  Maybe Darren could make his own dress for the summer term in the sewing classes.
 I know you could write several more chapters because you keep the readers attention as if taking them along with Darren/darryl on this journey.  You depictions make you want to join in with him as he puts on his skirts or dresses, right down to the frilly under garments.

Comment by chrissy on 12/06/09
This is one of the best stories that I have ever read. I wish i was born in a different time so that I could have had a similar experiance. I was touched by your writing style, and although its been a few years, I really wish that you would continue the story. Thank you for writing so beautifully.

Comment by Lisa Kaufmann on 06/29/09
Great story. Wonder where part three is? Sue we can contine with Darrel, Darryl and Lynda and see how they progress through life in the next grades as Darryl continues to help with netball and becomes the star of the team and then onto the rest of life.

Comment by Lorelei on 10/05/08
So, so fortunate are those who can choose between pants and skirts at school, especially during the pre-puberty period, before the gender characteristics become firmly established. To choose the skirts is to choose glory, freedom, joy, magic, adventure, sweetness, laughter...just what's needed to lighten any school workload. The right to pantsless bare legs makes wind, cold temperatures, and "Pull your skirt down, girl!" so worth it.

Comment by Peggy Sue on 06/02/08
I love this story. Thanks for what you've done. It's especially poignant for me that there is no parental hatchet spoiling the fun --on the contrary Darryl's mother is more than present in the game.

Comment by skyblueboomer on 06/22/07
Well looks like you're not going to continue to write. I will miss the continuing of the story.  (sniff)

Comment by Debilyn on 06/13/07
I'm SO grateful that somebody has finally actually associated girls' skirts with "comfort" and "freedom", after years of glossy paperback (plus TV and movie) escapist period romances wherein the heroine just can't wait to trash her femininity by thrusting her gorgeous gams into those anti-girl leg-hiding man-tubes. ("And, oh, how she loved the freedom of boy's clothes.")  The privilege of bare or stockinged legs beneath a sweet skirt or dress (mini, midi, or maxi) will provide a feelng that transcends "comfort" and "freedom".

Comment by John & Jean St-John on 04/17/07
Hello Darryl Foster
Well done, we have read all three parts and we really enjoyed it. John and I like to read stoies about young teenaged fellows who get to enjoy dressing up in female attire. we like the story because ther is no pressure to dress up, just a desire to  please  and to enjoy the feelings.
We sure hope you will decide to restart the story and carry it on thru high school and college and university then maybe get married in a regular church setting, she in her bride's gown and he in a tuxedo as Darren and Lynda. Have them take their honeymoon to Niagara Falls in Ontario Canada so that they can get married again as Darryl and Lynda both in bridal gowns, in a little chapel not far from The Falls.(It's Allowed in Canada)

Make sure Lynda is pregnant by the time they return home to England. Of course their first child is a boy who gets to do the same as daddy.
J&J St-John


Comment by Heaher on 02/16/07
Absolutely delightfull giggle giggle.   I hope that I can find the sequel if it has been finished.

Comment by rosemary langton on 08/16/06
Alovely story I loved the way her mother took her to Legoland as a very young girl I am looking forward to the next part Rosemary

Comment by rone on 11/21/05
Exelent  well written and good story.... Looking forward to the summer netball games when sisters  ask for darral to play on the team so he/she must get a summer dress uniform and kit ...the fact
that he was not forced do mean a lot to a story....cut back on the sex stuff even if there is a time for it ....thank you for a very good and well written story  ....Rone

Comment by stephanie on 04/08/05
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!! I just love it! I started to read the very first part and found myself just enjoying it so much, I had to read all three parts. I often find myself wishing that this is what exactly what I wanted when I was younger. To be part of a cheerleading squad or some sort of Drill team, going into competition and winning! Darren is sooooo lucky to have a mom as understanding and supportiveas she is. And a girlfriend too! the introduction of sex between the two was very sweet and sentimental, though maybe they are a little to young, but hey!.....who cares? Can't wait for the following chapter, please write it as soon as possible!

Comment by tracey on 11/06/04
What a wonderful story! I really have enjoyed it immensely and bitterly regret that I did not explore my feminine side when I was that young (50-something now) and could also probably pass well.

Please hurry and write some more!

Trace

Comment by Pippa K. on 06/29/04
My favorite kind of story!  I hope you'll write more.  You're very good at it.

Comment by Redhawk on 05/26/04
Good start, keep it at no forced feminization please.  Can you take the story all the way to a wedding between Darryl and Lynda?  that would be the logical conclussion.

Comment by julie larue on 05/07/04
oh i do hope you'll have part two soon.  ive read all three parts and you done a wonderful job of setting up the characters, the only difficulty i have is the sex part with them both so young.  altho i know boys at that age are starting to notice girls, and they have fantasies about doing 'it' with a girl.  you might explain the english version of what netball is to us uneducated americans (teehee) i'm thinking it is somewhat like our basketball.

Comment by vladd on 03/05/04
Oops Sorry I meant Darryl isn't normally considered a girls name but isn't unknown.......sorry typo.

vladd

Comment by vladd on 03/05/04
Hi Darryl,

actually while Darryl is not normally considered a boys name in the states, it isn't unknown either (take Darryl Hanna for instance).
anyway I love your story and please continue the story its a shame not to finish it.

thanks again
vladd

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 02/17/04
Hello Darryl:

   I enjoyed all three parts immensely. I must say that the name Darryl is not interchangeable over here in the States but we readers get the idea. That Darryl was respected and that all was in good fun was a real treasure.  I suspect that his Mummy knows by now that he is quite fond of girls clothes and always will be. I think she is getting a few surprises too.  

  Your writing is good including, description, construction, and basic mechanics.  Your main characters are well developed and quite sympathetic. I love Darryl and his Mum.  His Mum is a treasure and it is refreshing to have a real well balanced human being that really has her son's best interest at heart.  

  I think he would have a lot more harassment, but maybe not. The context allows for believability, doing it for the school.  And this could definitely be a continuing series that could go on and on.  Please write some more episodes.

Hugs,

Kristi

Comment by skyblueboomer on 12/29/03
nice going .keep it comming.you keep twinking new interest in you story. waiting for you next installment.

Comment by Catrina Lochley on 09/10/03
For me this story is close to perfection, the innocence and the tenderness are so right for it.
I don't mind whether it ends up as a trilogy or a series so long as we get more :0)
I wish I could write something as good as this.

Comment by Lee on 06/10/03
Very good story, love the innocence and tenderness.  Look forward to reading more episodes.

Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/20/02
Darryl, instead of a trilogy, make it into a conituing series. I love the exploits of Darryl. However, the sex is a bit much, and I skip over them. But outside of that, Darryl should have all the support he needs to become a girl. No forced feminization and no bondage or maid thing, but just an ordinary teenage girl, complete with her own breasts, naturally developing because of hormone therapy. Just an idea, hey.

Barb

Comment by Wanda on 09/27/02
Marvelous! Wonderful! It's so innocent, so loving, so tender...
I'm loogking forward the next chapter.
Well done!

Comment by Katie on 07/28/02
I've loved the stories so far.  So sweet and innocent.  It's been a delighted.  Can't wait for part 4!

Comment by Rose on 07/19/02
Another superb part to the story. It is expanding into a great series.
Keep up the good work.

Comment by Starhawk on 07/19/02
Keep up the good work.  Your character development is proceeding nicely.



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